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Patience

Patience

A Poem by AMMD
"

An ode to raspberry jello

"

You coagulate like blood

just not as fast

sweet like cheap candy,

so why do you mock me?

Is it that you

reject becoming

my ambrosia

for a mere buck?

Or are you attempting

to teach me

a life lesson

from a plastic bowl?

© 2017 AMMD


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Thank you for entering my little contest.
I cannot comment now as this would be unfair to other entries.
i shall return after the contest is over.
Best regards.
Clive.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cryptic, aha. Nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was well done
good job :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol Made me smile, clever :) x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K, this got a chuckle - I guess you thought it it would. But the lesson offered had whipped cream and the sweetest cherry never tasted.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMMD

9 Years Ago

I know RIGHT lol and thank you!
Chris

9 Years Ago

anytime... take care
Lol.....this is a very funny and witty write Angeline :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMMD

9 Years Ago

Thank you! =)
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
lol great poem made me smile! great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMMD

9 Years Ago

I was bored and hungry...thought the LEAST I could do was make someone else laugh about it all =) Th.. read more

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Added on May 12, 2014
Last Updated on November 8, 2017
Tags: Patience, Virtues, Life

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