Symphony of the Ocean

Sun drops tickle my face as a walk out the door,

The comforting satin wind flows across my face,

For a moment the world turns white,

My eyes are sealed locked up by imagination,

And I stroll along the warm golden carpet,

 As the blue tapestry’s beside me dance,

 To the crashing on the silver drums

The silk vines slither up from the ground,

White dressed lady’s sing from the terrace,

And the stars shine from the floor,

I can hear a call,

As my reality beckons me back I open my eyes,

 And the world looks a little brighter…

Author's Note

Walked out side during work and this was the result. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Kato Uchiha]

liked it !

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Enigma]

Beautiful ending. That one line can have so many beautiful meanings. I love it.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

And the world looks a little brighter...what an ending line...well penned...liked your theme too

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou. :)

[Nami Machae]

Very nice. I really liked this :)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you!

[Calibaster]

This is great. And ... as has been said before, beautiful. Great job.

[AWickedMoon]

:)

[Harley Rose]

Beautiful. That's all I can say. Beautiful.

[AWickedMoon]

:) Thank you Harley.

[Carnation]

Nice, soft flowing poem

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you Shadow!

[Junert]

It's a nice piece.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh how lovely and serene and bright:') Truly a magnificent peace, couldn't pic a favorite line because they were all so good! I Loved the way you ended it though! Very nice touch! :D
God Bless

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you :)

[Rob Santana]

How pretty Wicked.....

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you and always a pleasure when you stop by!