Immortal Life Metal song

Immortal Life.

 

Turn around, I hit the ground,

A bruise forming on my arm.

Blood seeping down my chest.

 

<Scream>

 

And I fall, kill the myths, kill the legons,

I am the underdog to the gods.

In my own I will survive!

 

Falling, falling, falling, crash.

 In the dust I lay deserted but undefeated.

I brush off the coals of my  fire and walk on. 

In search of freedom I can’t have.

In the distance I hear the damned.

 

<Scream>

 

Paint my lips in blood,

I was born with pity, but no humanity.

I will fight their battles, my satisfy my own lust.

 

I have no ties, only a mission,

Only a story half way written.

And in the end it comes with death.

My death but a kiss of freedom.

 

And I fall, kill the myths, kill the legends,

I am the underdog to the gods.

And without their help I will survive.

 

In the deserted shadows I will wander, left to ponder time.

And why so much is in my hand and so little in yours.

But for now In the dust I lay deserted but undefeated.

I brush off the coals of my fire and walk on.  

Once dead in afterlife,

Ill break through this veil,

And return to my perch upon this Shadowed world.

And my name they will taste on their lips.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think! Hoping to figure out some music for these songs and sing them!

Reviews

[Gaston Sanders]

Very good imagery in your writing. I liked this piece very much... it might serve well done in a song... maybe in ballad form. I saw what I thought was a typo... you wrote..."my satisfy my own lust." These pieces you do are very interesting and entertaining.