My Thoughtless Thought

it is the about the phase of my life when I stuck between the passion n peace..

How long this stillness pain will prevail in me and make me free
from the sequenceless spins....
Where i have been stuck__ from long time,

Time is roving hummingly;
And making me numb..! and just needs a satisfaction of
passion, life..!

Words become rhythm less for me to describe;
Just an ash (of moment) gives me a numb less satisfaction or irregular sigh of relief..!

Want to Stay in this moment ; but i can't..!
Is there anything remain left inside my inner stillness.

When i smile; The smile disappears,
When it will appear again i myself remain unknown about this
thought...!

And at last i just found myself to see the LOST of the THOUGHT
and find myself THOUGHTLESS...!!

Reviews

[R Smith]

Ah Aaqib to stay in that moment of the thoughtless thought, when the mind is clear and we dwell in the sea of oneness, just once did i see it but to return is my wish, although of course like us all I am still there, we just have to realize this truth, well written poem and a guide to silence of the mind thank you :)

[Aaqib Javaid]

Thank u so much sir for your kind appreciation.. means a lot :)

[Anahat]

Not exactly thoughtless...makes us ponder over certain things!
Emotions described very well!
Well done! Keep writing :)

-Love Anahat :)

[Kousika]

one suggestion yaar..
you can write more lines to keep still the reader for a moments.. that will give the readers a final touch..

[Aaqib Javaid]

Thanks for your review kousika, and the question about the final touch.. its answer lies in your initial comment...

[Kousika]

:))))

[Kousika]

nice work actually.. i can feel the aura that you had while you were writing this..
though you say it is thoughtless, it makes us to think on something which cannot be explained..