A Love like Morning

 

The Morning

 

When the sun comes up

The sky greets it with vibrant hues

It warms the moon chilled air

Leaving it crisp and clean

The morning dew is quickly dried

The birds begin their song

Welcoming the new day

 

My Love

 

When a smile rises

From the corners of her mouth

She warms the sorrow laden soul

Leaving it whole and new

Tears are gently wiped away

She helped a mute boy sing

And welcome a new life

Reviews

[Jessikah Marie]

dazzlingly brilliant :)

[Brittany]

This was so very beautiful. In a word, elegant.

Thank you for this piece.

[Queen Jummarrium]

wow. that was very beautiful and the emotion was very powerful. i loved the line;
"she helped a mute boy sing" it was just wonderful
overall a fantastic write

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Wow...i love this poem...great imagery
Great Job :)

[Marina]

Woah.

This is a really beautiful poem.
It took my breath away. It's so well written and the way you correlated the morning and your love was awsome.

It reminds me of the poem 'Nothing Gold Can Stay' by Jack Frost, except this poem is about love rather than age.

Nevertheless, it's extremley well written.

XxStaySweet,
Rina