Surkhiyaan

sometimes one has to leave beacuse nobody ask him to stay so there is no point in disturbing them again.

Surkhiyaan ban jayenge jab yaad tujhko aayenge hum,

Ye nighaahe teri humko dhoondti reh jaayengi.

 

 

Aaj jo tum o sitamghar yun satate jaa rahe ho,

Wada hai tujhko hamari kamiyaan khalti jaayengi.

 

 

Ek din hoga basera teri yaadon me hamara,

Un dino bhi tujhko beeti baatein hi behlaayengi.

 

 

Hum jahaan ke paar bhi ho fir b sunle humnashin,

Awaazein meri tere kesiyon ko choo ke jaayengi.

Reviews

[Sofia]

A good nd nyc write..i liked it..its beautiful...keep writing😃

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much sofia :)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!!

[Elizabeth]

"Ek din hoga basera teri yaadon me hamara,
Un dino bhi tujhko beeti baatein hi behlaayengi."
Amazing lines. this is indeed a very good poem.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much.. appreciation means a lot

[Elizabeth]

You're welcome

[Priyanshi]

nice poem in hindi . I loved it......keep it up.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much for reading priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

Pleasure is mine.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i loved this too....great!

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much wajiha... :)

[Zephyr]

Nice poem indeed...
Your description is very true..
Keep it up!

[Abhishek Asthana]

yups, even i think its a truthful stuff... thanks for reading

[Zephyr]

Always my pleasure....:)

[Ayush Mishra]

Waahhh....
"Ek din hoga basera teri yaadon me hamara,
Un dino bhi tujhko beeti baatein hi behlaayengi."
##Smjhe :p

[Abhishek Asthana]

aap samjho... hum samjhe samjhaayein paida hue h janaab.. :)

[Ayush Mishra]

hahaha.....

[Sikandar Khan]

So Nice Shayari Paa JI.....

[Abhishek Asthana]

bht bht shukriaa bhaijaan :)

[Surya]

Wahh..!..that's touching..I loved it..:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thank u so much surya

[Farhan Shaikh]

A heart touching poem...more when i found it in our native language...

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much... i just wanted to write on most realistic theme... i think the word "avoidance" itself is a curse.