Surkhiyaan

Surkhiyaan

A Poem by Abhishek Asthana
"

sometimes one has to leave beacuse nobody ask him to stay so there is no point in disturbing them again.

"

Surkhiyaan ban jayenge jab yaad tujhko aayenge hum,

Ye nighaahe teri humko dhoondti reh jaayengi.

 

 

Aaj jo tum o sitamghar yun satate jaa rahe ho,

Wada hai tujhko hamari kamiyaan khalti jaayengi.

 

 

Ek din hoga basera teri yaadon me hamara,

Un dino bhi tujhko beeti baatein hi behlaayengi.

 

 

Hum jahaan ke paar bhi ho fir b sunle humnashin,

Awaazein meri tere kesiyon ko choo ke jaayengi.


© 2017 Abhishek Asthana



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A good nd nyc write..i liked it..its beautiful...keep writing😃

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

thank you so much sofia :)
Sofia

6 Months Ago

My pleasure!!
"Ek din hoga basera teri yaadon me hamara,
Un dino bhi tujhko beeti baatein hi behlaayengi."
Amazing lines. this is indeed a very good poem.


Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

thank you so much.. appreciation means a lot
DarkMist

6 Months Ago

You're welcome
nice poem in hindi . I loved it......keep it up.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

thank you so much for reading priyanshi
Priyanshi

7 Months Ago

Pleasure is mine.
i loved this too....great!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

thank you so much wajiha... :)
Nice poem indeed...
Your description is very true..
Keep it up!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

yups, even i think its a truthful stuff... thanks for reading
Neetha

7 Months Ago

Always my pleasure....:)
Waahhh....
"Ek din hoga basera teri yaadon me hamara,
Un dino bhi tujhko beeti baatein hi behlaayengi."
##Smjhe :p

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

aap samjho... hum samjhe samjhaayein paida hue h janaab.. :)
Ayush Mishra

7 Months Ago

hahaha.....
So Nice Shayari Paa JI.....

Posted 8 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

8 Months Ago

bht bht shukriaa bhaijaan :)
Wahh..!..that's touching..I loved it..:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

8 Months Ago

Thank u so much surya
A heart touching poem...more when i found it in our native language...


Posted 8 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

8 Months Ago

thank you so much... i just wanted to write on most realistic theme... i think the word "avoidance" .. read more

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Added on April 22, 2017
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Abhishek Asthana
Abhishek Asthana

Lucknow , The City of Nawabs, India



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