Migration

Most people can find someone in their own family who had experienced a migration of some kind, knowing the sense of dislocation, longing and fortitude.

The isolation from vernacular has palpably led to the worries,

Stray your valiant mind into the world of memories.

 

 

The contemplation of past events, it will bring tranquility,

Be sturdy from inside, accept this transfiguration with equanimity.

 

 

Reviving erstwhile episodes will oversee a freakish smile on your face,

Undeniably you will be bound to move rearward at a rapid pace.

 

 

Once you perceive this truth, the combat seems invincible,

Arduously you would obtain relations like those, someday it will turn amicable.

 

 

it could be geographical segregation but not incongruity of souls,

utterly, it's a worthwhile development and passageway of the new roles !!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I have often wondered how I would cope with migration. The separation from everything I have ever known and friends and family would be almost impossible for me to deal with. I have to say I admire those who have the fortitude to do it. The pull for a better or safer life would have to be incredibly strong. A fine write which is thought provoking Abhishek.

Chris

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks for your kind visit.. I am glad you liked it !

[Krutika]

Well I think we are always migrating not always in geographical sense.. but from past to present.. It's funny we don't always notice that though.. I think your writing rings true in this case too..I like the depth you explored in few words. 😊👍

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much krutika for your kind visit... i m glad u understood d aura of d poem

[L.C. Jarrette]

wow..i think i'm in love.

[Abhishek Asthana]

haha,, thats so sweet of you... thank you so much for reading !!

[Elizabeth]

This is beautiful
it could be geographical segregation but not incongruity of souls,
utterly, it's a worthwhile development and passageway of the new roles !!
A truly meaningful line. Thank you for sharing this amazing poem.

[Abhishek Asthana]

and really thanks for your kind words :)

[Elizabeth]

You're welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have moved "rearward" at times...and very rapidly...
the way the world is today...i have longed to go back, far back---but just yesterday, i was with someone from the past...and suddenly the present and future loomed as possibilities once again.

j.

[Abhishek Asthana]

your words are solar...always emerge brightness all around... thanks for your kind visit sir :)

[pia]

My grandfather migrated from india and this would be something he'd feel very deeply
"it could be geographical segregation but not incongruity of souls"
Loved this line
Its so true
He may be in a different country now
But still is proud of his roots

[Abhishek Asthana]

that's really good to know that it is relatable to your grandfather...and i hope his feeling of pride will remain vivid forever...thank you so much for reading :)

[wordman]

loved the trip,the imagery was vivid

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot for your kind visit sir...i am happy u liked it :)

[Chase Dylan]

Oh, wow... For a moment I thought I was reading my own work, which is not to say it is better or worse... Just the way you construct flow landscape... It reminds me very much of how I construct my own... Perfection, my friend, you have a new fan... Seriously, quite impressive syllable shapes and hip-hop feel... Bravo'... Masterfully penned...

[Abhishek Asthana]

its a matter of pride for me if this piece reminds you of your writings... in fact i am a biggest fan of yours... our writing stuff can only be good or better but some of your creation left me speechless truly...thank a lot for your kind words silente... i am so glad you liked it

[Chase Dylan]

Continue to feel that pride, because this is absolutely jaw-dropping...! It warms my heart to hear you are a big fan, and I hope you know I am a big fan of yours now as well...! Your kind words have left me speechless, and it was my pleasure to read and review...

[Sofia]

Fabulous!! You have fabulous English skills...it was a bit complex for me...but np..😊 I liked it...Another amazing piece of poetry..

[Abhishek Asthana]

not really... not like that,,, still i am learning,,, just want to add a poem which is soothing for my readers and i am really grateful that they are liking it.
thank you so much sofia :)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!!

[Priyanshi]

Another great work of yours....an amazing poem, Keep it up.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot priyanshi... i really appreciate your words and just glad to know that you liked it.

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Friend.

[heartspeaks]

felt like reading a shakespearan era poem...loved it...keep writing... though a bit complex but unique in its own. well done

[Abhishek Asthana]

please don't say like that... i really don't deserve... i am a very common writer... i am happy you found it so unique... thanks a lot