Retrograde

Retrograde

A Poem by Abhishek Asthana
"

truly said, that its hard to forget who gives you so much to remember

"

Ghoorte ab kya ho khaamosh in tasveeron ko tum,

Kahin bol na padu mai, ektak yu tere dekhne se.

 

 

 

Sabak ishq ka izzat se le chuke hai yaar kai baar ab to,

Hota na kuch haasil hai such hai angaaron pe dil sekne se.

 

 

 

Khaayi hi nahi to todoge kya kasme wafaaye ishq ki,

Choor choor sa ho gaya hai dil ye khilona tere fekne se.

 

 

 

Kisko karoge ab fanaa, ke ab dard-e-muhabbat jhelo tum,

sach jhooth me tabdeel nahi hota, sajda krne ya maatha tekne se.


© 2017 Abhishek Asthana



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You are true to the place you come from. You are indeed a great poet...

Posted 3 Months Ago


again, would like the English version included, this leaves so many of us out, when we cannot read the poem at all.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

yaa sure sir,

now, why are you keep on staring at these silent photos
i will b.. read more
You write so well in hindi, though English poems are also excellent, but i love reading hindi poems more.
This poem shows you as a true great poet, keep it up, Abhishek.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

frankly speaking i never think of myself as a great poet... i just love to write some pieces in my n.. read more
wonderfully written.. i like it!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

thank you wajiha for reading it
Well Done....great effort


Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

thank you so much sanskrity
Sanskrity Mishra

6 Months Ago

Welcome....
good work...keep writing..

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

yups sure buddy, i will.. thanks
Very true and wonderful..
Amazing to read.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

thank you so much farhan :)
Very true and thoughtful lines. I liked it a lot.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

thank you so much for reading... i am glad you liked this one...!! :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
BEAUTIFUL....i can understand each word and can connect myself..we can only love someone but they doesn't gives us the promise to love you back the whole life as you did

Posted 7 Months Ago


horizon

7 Months Ago

you do not need to say thanks for every review your work is worth reading😀😀
Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

it was not just for reading, moreover reviews induce me from inside and helps me to write down my pe.. read more
horizon

7 Months Ago

okk then I should say your welcome 👍
Last lines are true and whole poem of course...it's hard to forget those who give us much...:)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

7 Months Ago

exactly.. but sometimes one person gets late to realize it... i am glad you liked it

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Abhishek Asthana
Abhishek Asthana

Lucknow , The City of Nawabs, India



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Don't judge me on the basis of my creativity... M a bit common person who sometimes can imagine things on a high note bt not positive many times... who always keen to observe things on a very minute l.. more..

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