Sitam

Sitam

A Poem by Abhishek Asthana
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Sometimes it's more traumatic for one that the person whom you made so feel special yesterday, the same makes you feel so unwanted today.

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Muddaton se chaha tha tujhe, sach hai badi minnaton se paya tha,

zahen me jo aaya mere, yakeenan har wo tareeka aajmaya tha..

 

 

Par tujhe khone ke khauf me aie azeez, galib har pal ghabraya tha,

Har imtihaan se guzarne ko tha raazi, ke ye dil tera hi sarmaaya tha..

 

 

Muhabbat ki aatish se tha ye sama roshan, jiska shola tune bhadkaya tha,

Aakhri lamho me ikttijaa thi teri, par khuda ne rahem hi kab mujhpe barsaya tha..

 

 

Aasra ik tera hi tha hamko O zalim, kusoor itna tha ke tujhse dil lagaya tha,

Be-taseer tha kya ye ishq hamara, aab-e-chashm ka ghoot tune hame pilaya tha..

 

 

Ghayal the teri ham zafa se magar, muhabbat ke takht par hamne tujhe bithaya tha,

Naagawaar hum tumhe kyu hue kya khabar, toota wo khwaabo ka mela jo hamnne sang sajaya the..

 

 

Tukde hokar bikhra ye dil aakhir me, sitam hi tumne hampar aisa dhaaya tha,

Ye fariyad tere kaano me goonji jo dheerey se, koi aur nahi hamnashin wo mera hi saaya tha..!!





© 2017 Abhishek Asthana



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Are you kidding? Is This really your work...Looks like Mirza Galib's poetry...You surely are a Urdu Fan... I am just spell bound ...

Ab kya tareef karun?
Jo khud zarra zarra tareef ho
ab uski kya tareef karun

Your poems are amazing...This was a wonderful poetry...Keep it up

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

5 Months Ago

Oh my god !! i can't take it brother... i am a very common writer but yes i am a big fan of urdu... .. read more



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Wow, amazing. Superb poetry. Feelings come alive with your poetry...

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Wahh...kya baat hai nawab sahab! Though my urdu isn't that strong...I could still feel the emotions as i read this line by line...urdu the matlab ki khoobsurti hai...aapke lafzon ne iski khoobsurti ko aur bhi badha diya. Behtareen...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Are you kidding? Is This really your work...Looks like Mirza Galib's poetry...You surely are a Urdu Fan... I am just spell bound ...

Ab kya tareef karun?
Jo khud zarra zarra tareef ho
ab uski kya tareef karun

Your poems are amazing...This was a wonderful poetry...Keep it up

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

5 Months Ago

Oh my god !! i can't take it brother... i am a very common writer but yes i am a big fan of urdu... .. read more
Mindblowing Urdu words...loved it ...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

thanks a lot buddy... m glad u loved it
Apki nasheed ko dekh kr socha to bhot pr likha km mainee, ki apki tareef ke kabil mere alfaaz kha.... Mashallah kya khoob likha h apne

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

Hahaha...biggest compliment and that too in style...quite impressed...thanks a ton Divyani :)
Again not very good with urdu
Or hindi in your case
But what ever i managed to read.
Wonderfully written
I love it

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

Oh,, i thought you might be very good at urdu... sorry if it troubled you... well i love this langua.. read more
pia

6 Months Ago

I can speak ittt !! Very well but i have a tough time reading it
I spent 15 years studying i.. read more
Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

exactly... and i believe the contribution of urdu in poetry is unmatchable
Lovely! You used Urdu very well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

thanks a lot anjali... glad u liked it... yes, i have deep love 4 urdu :)
Beautiful!! Itni acchi Urdu kaise aati hai aapko?? Its really really wonderful☺......truly..i loved it..its just so beautiful 😃 thnx for sharing

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much sofia for your kind words... hahaha... I guess being lucknow citizen thodi urdu to.. read more
Sofia

6 Months Ago

You're welcome 😃 yeah, keep writing and I'll keep reviewing 😃...
would like to see you post these poems with two versions...including a translation.

j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

sure sir, i will keep in mind...as few of my writer friends want it to be translated in both version.. read more
Nyc one.
Keep going.
Cheers and peace out.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind words of and visit sudeep

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Lucknow , The City of Nawabs, India



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