Privacy Matters?

Privacy Matters?

A Poem by Abraham George
"

You never know the feeling of others

"

I was with you always

Listening to the lovely words

Without you knowing, feeling

Your emotions as i heard

You were talking to me whenever

You felt, I didn’t know

That it wasn’t me

That you talking to

Your bliss, shared with

Me as you share your grief

You were sad when you lost me

And after found, forever you hold me

I wish to be in this arms

Feeling your warm hands

Around me tight and

Those fondling was an ease

You keep me silent and

Kiss me many times as I know

I saw all your shame

But never mind the same

Wanna be the one in your

Heart in my coming life

B’coz now I can’t be

Since I’m only your phone


© 2017 Abraham George



Author's Note

Abraham George
Love Love and Love only

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Incredible imagery.
Really well written!
Well done.


Posted 3 Months Ago


The end was so unexpected I was shocked!
Great job on this

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

thanks and i am glad to know that you liked it.
oh man the ending got me! this is such an interesting read buddy, well done!
an other amazing work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

thanks for your comments buddy.
Joey Nizz

4 Months Ago

Your welcome :)
Amazing, and beautiful. I loved the twist at the end!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

thanks and i am glad to know that you liked it.
Wow!! This was clever.. You did an incredible job with describing that. And the twist was great.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

thanks for your comments and i am so happy to see that you liked this.
WOW! What a twist ending, after seeing it it made me not only read over the poem but saw it in a different light. It was like I was reading two different poems. Your mastery of poetic language was able to perform an absolutely marvellous magic trick right before my very eyes. Awesome work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

wow. after reading your review my eyes are flooded.
thanks . i am so happy and honored.
The ending surprised me. lol I thought this was going to be the love for an imaginary friend. Fantastic poem, mate. :D

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

i wrote this to tease one of my friend who work with me. he always chat with girls over his phone.
Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

Very creative, my friend. :D
Very sweet and deep. "I was with you always", made me a little sad". Made me think one of the people are not with the other anymore.

I really did enjoy the poem though.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

thanks for your visit and kind comments.
this was beautiful....i loved it so much that i can't even tell....
so much depth this poem had...keep it up manh!
wonderful.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

thanks for your comments and i am glad to know you liked this.
Privacy always matters. Always and never should waver. Ever. I admire the meaning of privacy. It's very crucial.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abraham George

4 Months Ago

mmmm. thanks for your visit.

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Added on February 8, 2017
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Abraham George

Thrissur, Kerala, India



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