MY THIRST

i am thirsty to drink--- wine=beauty, crystal glass= Girl Friend(Lover)

I’m addicted,

To be tipsy

It keeps me alive

Even without breath

 

Not all drinks

In the world

Only wine I drink

Only Pure Wine

 

After mashing- grapes

Stored and kept for years

Even sunlight didn’t touch

To spoil its taste

 

Bottled in a crystal glass

Labeled with rainbow colors

Laughing ‘n ‘pulling me

Towards, like a magnet do

 

Open it gently

Fondle with care

Pre-rinse my glass

With a small splash

 

Rubbing off those drops

Cleansing my glass

Filling it again with

Pure drops of wine

 

Swirling it, brings out

Flavors and aromas

Smelling it for traits

Tasting it with my tongue

 

 Hey! You are not

The wine. I learnt

You’re that beauty-

Pure wine- bottled crystal glass

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. A good wine is wonderful. I enjoyed your thoughts and opinion of wine and life. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Stephanie M]

Nicely done. I especially like the last stanza.

[Abraham George]

happy to see you likes.

[Matthew Kult]

Romanticly inebriated

Great read

Matthew

[Abraham George]

thanks for stopping and giving a comment.

[Jackie]

Wow! i must say, even with out rhyming this one read through real nice and smooth. It was lovely

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments

[Norah]

Incredibly descriptive and the mood is spot on. I enjoyed reading it1

[Raven Moonchild]

I don't drink wine, but I've always thought it looked pretty in a wine glass. It reminds me of blood from vampire movies. :) Beautiful poem. :D

[Abraham George]

thanks for the comments. this is not about the wine.
its all about a girl.

[Raven Moonchild]

I'm so sorry, thought it was about wine. lol Rereading this after you said that, I can see it's meaning. :)

[fadingtale]

What a beautifully written poem! I really love this stanza: "Hey! You are not

The wine. I learnt

You’re that beauty-

Pure wine- bottled crystal glass."

Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

[Abraham George]

you are welcome and thanks for your comments.

[Bala Gorthi]

very unique and original way to describe what love can be to a person. I really enjoyed reading this write..
Thank you for sharing

[Abraham George]

thanks for your visit and comments.

[Zephyr]

This is a completely different context.
And creative too.
Loved the symbolism you brought out.
good poem!

[Abraham George]

What different context?

[Abraham George]

its about love only.

[Zephyr]

By diff context, I meant the symbolism you brought out.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

This is very instilling. About a thirst for a simple bottle of wine. I know the feeling of having a loving hankering for something... it's like a sensation that suddenly hits you. Very well done.

[Abraham George]

its not the wine. Read it carefully.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

It's about Love?! Even better...

[Abraham George]

its about love.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

Any poem that speaks of love... is a heartfelt poem indeed.