Lost Love

Lost Love

A Poem by Abraham George
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She is gone

"

Yesterday when I was sleeping

You were there in my dreams

Like every night before and I’m

Sure, will be there in coming

Even after I lost you, there’s a feeling

That you still inside in my heart

Or when you left me alone

You took my heart with you?

While you left me by hatred

Why you broke my heart and

Make it bleed, left me in a mess

Behind alone in the darkness

Since the day you left me

I’m crying in sorrow

Will cry in coming morrow

In pain of my broken heart

I sing a lot while you were with

 Me before to make you smile

Now I am singing after you

Gone, to keep me away from crying

You taught me to hide my tears

With smile. I’m doing without fears

You taught me to live without heart

I’m living now without you as my part


© 2017 Abraham George



Author's Note

Abraham George
Fast and in Hurry. begging for the forgiveness bcoz mistakes will be there .

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beautiful as it has to be...keep it up!
you write really well...keep going.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Abraham George

2 Months Ago

thanks for your comments and visit.
It's depend upon u.... Remember ur swt memories.... U ll be hpy... Dnt ever think about the worst past

Posted 2 Months Ago


Abraham George

2 Months Ago

thanks for your comments and showing your view.
love is never lost,just transformed to memories

Posted 2 Months Ago


Abraham George

2 Months Ago

yeah. thanks for suggestion.
Excellent flow of words.
Keep it up!
I dont't know many people who can write both poems and stories as adeptly as you.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Abraham George

2 Months Ago

its a big compliment. thanks
I like this poem very much through this I can understand ur feelings frnd really superb

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

thanks and i am happy to know that you like it.
The lessons of love. Can make us cold and lonely.
"You taught me to live without heart
I’m living now without you as my part"
Some lessons are permanent. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

thanks for the comments
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome.
I can really relate to your words, you have wrote this perfectly and with strong emotions and strong words with every line written!

Well done Abraham, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

thanks for your time you spent on my poem
Joey Nizz

3 Months Ago

Your welcome, its nice to read something by you again :)
this is well written, the emotion is for sure there. I do think the better grammar will for sure help the piece be better portrayed because it can be a bit confusing at times, but besides that, it's great!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

thanks for the suggestions and happy to hear that you like it
This poem correctly expresses the thoughts of a broken heart and when you still love them with those broken pieces.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

while writing i didn't try to express but after i complete this, i felt that you are going through t.. read more
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Difference is that I didn't lose him.
Abraham George

3 Months Ago

yes i understand.

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Added on June 28, 2017
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Abraham George
Abraham George

Thrissur, Kerala, India



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