Lost Love

She is gone

Yesterday when I was sleeping

You were there in my dreams

Like every night before and I’m

Sure, will be there in coming

Even after I lost you, there’s a feeling

That you still inside in my heart

Or when you left me alone

You took my heart with you?

While you left me by hatred

Why you broke my heart and

Make it bleed, left me in a mess

Behind alone in the darkness

Since the day you left me

I’m crying in sorrow

Will cry in coming morrow

In pain of my broken heart

I sing a lot while you were with

 Me before to make you smile

Now I am singing after you

Gone, to keep me away from crying

You taught me to hide my tears

With smile. I’m doing without fears

You taught me to live without heart

I’m living now without you as my part

Author's Note

Fast and in Hurry. begging for the forgiveness bcoz mistakes will be there .

Reviews

[natzky]

pain is always accompanied by love sir' abraham..ahahahah..anyways, just keep on upgrading yourself and that girl will realized what she lost..lolz

[Abraham George]

thanks for stopping by.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautiful as it has to be...keep it up!
you write really well...keep going.

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments and visit.

[Sandipta$]

It's depend upon u.... Remember ur swt memories.... U ll be hpy... Dnt ever think about the worst past

[Abraham George]

thanks for your comments and showing your view.

[wordman]

love is never lost,just transformed to memories

[Abraham George]

yeah. thanks for suggestion.

[Jiya]

Excellent flow of words.
Keep it up!
I dont't know many people who can write both poems and stories as adeptly as you.

[Abraham George]

its a big compliment. thanks

[hemapriya]

I like this poem very much through this I can understand ur feelings frnd really superb

[Abraham George]

thanks and i am happy to know that you like it.

[Coyote Poetry]

The lessons of love. Can make us cold and lonely.
"You taught me to live without heart
I’m living now without you as my part"
Some lessons are permanent. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Abraham George]

thanks for the comments

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Joey Nizz]

I can really relate to your words, you have wrote this perfectly and with strong emotions and strong words with every line written!

Well done Abraham, thanks for sharing :)

[Abraham George]

thanks for your time you spent on my poem

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, its nice to read something by you again :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is well written, the emotion is for sure there. I do think the better grammar will for sure help the piece be better portrayed because it can be a bit confusing at times, but besides that, it's great!

[Abraham George]

thanks for the suggestions and happy to hear that you like it

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem correctly expresses the thoughts of a broken heart and when you still love them with those broken pieces.

[Abraham George]

i try to dedicate this for you

[Najam Us Saher]

You mean that you have tried to express my feelings in this one ?

[Abraham George]

yes i tried

[Abraham George]

while writing i didn't try to express but after i complete this, i felt that you are going through these emotions now.

[Najam Us Saher]

Difference is that I didn't lose him.

[Abraham George]

yes i understand.