Uncle Bun

Uncle Bun

A Poem by Abraham George
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Written for a time-pass...........

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I have a friend, His name is Uncle Bun

He loves The Big Mac hamburger and Bun

He was from Never-land, place of Peter Pan

He always travel in his own Van 

 


His favorite restaurant is McDonald’s

While his best character was Duck Donald,

Because he love President Donald.

His favorite actor is Sutherland Donald

 

I love my friend from Never-Land

Linkin park is my favorite band

I don’t like to demand

I heard Lost boys story firsthand.


© 2017 Abraham George



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I do enjoy rhyming poems, this one is very good. Nice job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


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mou
oh it's so funny..a light humorous one with very interesting and funny words to maintain the sweet flow..enjoy it ..also my first review on your page probably..Great!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abraham George

6 Months Ago

it's not my best . Better read other poem or story to evaluate me. Thanks for stopinng by and commen.. read more
mou

6 Months Ago

I did not read writes to evaluate others,,as I don't place myself at that place but just love to rea.. read more
Abraham George

6 Months Ago

i will give a visit dear.
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Lmao... This was just plain great... The references... The wordplay... Smashing...

Posted 10 Months Ago


I am fascinated by the rhyme. I also understand that you are talking about uncle bun, yet I don't feel the last verse connected

Posted 11 Months Ago


I think the lines above would sound great as a song. Nice use of words; simple and short. I wasn't able to see what you were trying to convey :(
Keep it up xx

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nice flow of words...............
Perfect rhyme...........



Posted 1 Year Ago


This is an interesting flow of ideas that are loosely connected by the related words thru-out. I like the loosely structured names & rhymes, but I have to tell ya, I don't like anyone who likes Trump, so that's not such a good line. Maybe something a little less simple-minded, such as: "he's baffled by President Trump" which would be a nice way to say the truth of our situation here. Very few people love this very bad president. So think about this line, OK? Thanks!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

i think you didn't understand the meaning.

While his best character was Duck Donald,.. read more
Abraham George

1 Year Ago

nothing more there.
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Gee
Rhyming for rhyming sake often leaves me non the wiser after reading. I have seen awesome and brilliant written in other reviews, perhaps I am missing something

Posted 1 Year Ago


rhyming words are brilliant, and very finely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thanks for the visit and comments
Priyanshi

1 Year Ago

my pleasure.
Firstly, I loved loved and loved the creativity used in here! It's just so beautiful, and secondly, the rhyming scheme is perfect! I loved it a lot!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Abraham George

1 Year Ago

thank you.
Anjali

1 Year Ago

You are welcome!

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Thrissur, Kerala, India



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