Dear Sister

Dear Sister

A Poem by Abraham George
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Dedicated to my Dear Sister

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You are an angel in disguise.

You are intelligent and wise.
Having a sister like you is a gift
Sometimes between us there’s a split.

 

I treasure the moments that we’d laugh together

I try to shoot jokes to make you feel better

Whether it’s a silly joke or corny

You laugh at them to make me happy

 

I share my secrets, coz’ you understand me

You shared yours, coz’ you trust me.

You are always there for me

Good times and bad time.

If I’m not there- please forgive me-

With you when you need me.

 

Whether it’s s silly joke or about that person in the corner

You’re open to me, which I honor.

That smiles and frowns on your picture I treasure

Stays there on your face forever I make sure.

I regret for the moments that we fight

Coz’ I believe that you are right.

 

May be our promises will fade

But sure in my heart you will hide
may be we have fight in many way

But couldn’t have survived life without you along the way

 

If I had one wish, it would surely be

To give you as a sister in my all lives
you’ve been my sunshine in so many ways.
In this world no one is perfect.
But in my world you’re Miss Perfect

 

I am very glad to have you as a sister

You give me tons of laughter

You are the best friend I've ever had.
My gratitude for you has no end.

 

 


© 2017 Abraham George



Author's Note

Abraham George
Forgive me for the mistakes- Like to get critic reviews to make this more good.- Editing help from- Tabby Mac. Thanks Tabby Mac

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I love to red tributes to loved ones. Especially siblings because I don’t have any. The thoughts are beautiful! You started off really strong...near the middle I think is where your words are heartfelt but seems like your wrestling between rhyme and the right words to describe your sister. This is a great first draft. I’d reread it a few times. If you rework a few lines it would really keep the momentum going till the end! The one stanza ends with me almost every line. You almost have it! The message is AWESOME! And the heart is definitely there!! I look forward to your revision!
Tabby

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abraham George

1 Month Ago

And i really love sisters because i really don't have one. I really need one and now i have one cute.. read more
Tabby Mac

1 Month Ago

That’s lovely! I shall try and give some specifics! I’ll message them to you!
Tabby
Abraham George

1 Month Ago

i am waiting for that.



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Not everyone has a good family.

Regardless of how it ends, more poems like this would be nice.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Abraham George

3 Days Ago

Thanks for your comments and i glad that you liked.
Such a loving dedication to your sister. Your love and admiration for her so eloquently described. Very moving poem. Please keep writing.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Abraham George

3 Days Ago

Thanks for stopping by and dropping comments. i am happy.
A wonderful poem! I loved the tribute to your sister! Sibling relationships are very precious and sacred :)




To give you as a sister in my all lives

Don't you think it should've been have instead of give?

A wonderful and emotional write altogether. Keep it up!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Abraham George

1 Week Ago

Thanks for the genuine comments. I'm also a little confused on that line. I'm checking a better alte.. read more
This was such a sweet poem to read! I loved it! I personally do not have a sister, but for a moment it almost felt like I did while reading this poem. Your sister is very lucky to have such a loving sibling - my brother would never do anything like this for me. This was a lovely read!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Abraham George

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the genuine comments.
It's touching to read tributes to others and sisters and brothers can share a great bond. The love you have for your sister is very evident in this piece.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Abraham George

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you My friend.
I have a sister too so I can relate to this very well. Nicely written!!!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I have a sister too so I can relate to this very well. Nicely written!!!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Abraham George

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the comment and i'm glad to see you liked.
A wonderful poem for your sister. Your words kind and generous. I loved the complete poem. Thank you Abraham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I feel the same way for my brother. Since my mama has passed I feel he is all I have left of her. We were always close, but now ever more so. I loved the poem it was sweet.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Abraham George

4 Weeks Ago

i am happy to know that you loved this . This poem i dedicate to all sisters.

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