Dear Sister

Dear Sister

A Poem by Abraham George
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Dedicated to my Dear Sister

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You are an angel in disguise.

You are intelligent and wise.
Having a sister like you is a gift
Sometimes between us there’s a split.

 

I treasure the moments that we’d laugh together

I try to shoot jokes to make you feel better

Whether it’s a silly joke or corny

You laugh at them to make me happy

 

I share my secrets, coz’ you understand me

You shared yours, coz’ you trust me.

You are always there for me

Good times and bad time.

If I’m not there- please forgive me-

With you when you need me.

 

Whether it’s s silly joke or about that person in the corner

You’re open to me, which I honor.

That smiles and frowns on your picture I treasure

Stays there on your face forever I make sure.

I regret for the moments that we fight

Coz’ I believe that you are right.

 

May be our promises will fade

But sure in my heart you will hide
may be we have fight in many way

But couldn’t have survived life without you along the way

 

If I had one wish, it would surely be

To give you as a sister in my all lives
you’ve been my sunshine in so many ways.
In this world no one is perfect.
But in my world you’re Miss Perfect

 

I am very glad to have you as a sister

You give me tons of laughter

You are the best friend I've ever had.
My gratitude for you has no end.

 

 


© 2017 Abraham George



Author's Note

Abraham George
Forgive me for the mistakes- Like to get critic reviews to make this more good.- Editing help from- Tabby Mac. Thanks Tabby Mac

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I love to red tributes to loved ones. Especially siblings because I don’t have any. The thoughts are beautiful! You started off really strong...near the middle I think is where your words are heartfelt but seems like your wrestling between rhyme and the right words to describe your sister. This is a great first draft. I’d reread it a few times. If you rework a few lines it would really keep the momentum going till the end! The one stanza ends with me almost every line. You almost have it! The message is AWESOME! And the heart is definitely there!! I look forward to your revision!
Tabby

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abraham George

9 Months Ago

And i really love sisters because i really don't have one. I really need one and now i have one cute.. read more
Tabby Mac

9 Months Ago

That’s lovely! I shall try and give some specifics! I’ll message them to you!
Tabby
Abraham George

9 Months Ago

i am waiting for that.



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Isn't it
To have you as my sister in all my lives
The poem was beautifully written👏👏👏

Posted 1 Month Ago


What a beautiful tribute to your sister. I think if you rework a few words and stanzas this will be extra strong. However, the emotions are definitely there!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Abraham George

2 Months Ago

Thanks for the comments and i will check what i can do to make it Xtra strong.
I also have a sister and she is my best friend ..This poem won my heart.. really loved this poem😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


Awww, this is so sweet 💜

Posted 2 Months Ago


This again won my heart!!!😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


Abraham George

2 Months Ago

thanks for your comments and i am so happy to see you like it that much.
Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Months Ago

Indeed it did! You're heartedly welcome😊!
Aww...I also love my both brothers...don't know If they're away...how am gonna live...
You're one is truly heart touching!
Thanks for writing n sharing this😊

Posted 3 Months Ago


Abraham George

3 Months Ago

your brothers are lucky to have you as a sister.
Tahsin.Z🍁

3 Months Ago

Thank you!!
Really gud ..ma frnd...I luv brothers a lot ...but the same I don't have one...Really hrt melting

Posted 3 Months Ago


hemapriya

3 Months Ago

Then I'm ur sis ryt ma bro
Abraham George

3 Months Ago

i wrote this for my sister Najam Us Saher. She reviewed this first.

You need me as a .. read more
hemapriya

3 Months Ago

Yup ...it's ur wish Abraham jst asked
It is excellent that you have such family unity and support; especially with a sibling! Your poetic write highlights the enthusiasm and appreciation of just such close family relationship – good share! :-)

Posted 3 Months Ago


That is so sweet that you are so close with your sister. That's rare these days. I'm sure you are a wonderful brother. Very nicely written.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Abraham George

5 Months Ago

thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. I am glad that you like this.
love the dedication to your sibilings! it shows how much you care for her. the beginig was strong and i could feel your emtions tword the middle, you finished stong. :3

Posted 6 Months Ago


Abraham George

6 Months Ago

i really wish she was my real sister. Unfortunately she is my my lovely sister i found here. She is .. read more

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