Loss

Loss

A Poem by Wraith.
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death.

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A recoiling wraith skims my flesh
and I am left once more 
coldness branching from the spine 
A numbness that is raw

no trace is left
the clouds are curdling overhead
no time exists 
when you wear guilt 

Intangible the dread consuming me 
negativity emanates
clouding the purity 
all is black

and the unbearable cold 
will alter your lungs 
make you feel other- worldly 

fragility of life
I see now that all can be lost 
 before the stars 
I wish I was dust once more 

© 2013 Wraith.


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Great Poem!! Love it, so many feelings too. So well written! You are phenomenal! Describing the pain is so perfect and to wish you were dust once moer, so amazing. I myself have a great loss and this is incredible!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very nice poem. Thank you for sharing...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wraith.

10 Years Ago

Thankyou for the comment!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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Added on October 17, 2013
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Wraith.
Wraith.

warwickshire, United Kingdom



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