Night Reign

Night Reign

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
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When we are cursed with pain, nostalgia, misery and haterd

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Let the dark thrashing night reign,

Slip into misery fain,

Let me bleed tears, wail within,

Recall you and curse heaven.

 

An ill heart of a twisted heathen,

A shrine for all the demons,

A mirage in a void of death,

A grave for my love, the myth.

 

A Gothic necropolis

Of red seething necrosis,

At every unknown grave weeps,

Howls at every corpse asleep.

 

A ghost of a fading being,

A deep shame his heart fleeing,

Let the dark empty night reign,

And the void within howl again.

© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-


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Dye
I truly enjoyed this Adam. Not only does the pain come across in this, but I feel like it is written to show that the pain doesn't end. It keeps going on and on.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poignant , haunted write , I like the play on words and the expression of loss. Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

10 Years Ago

Thank you, moon.
I missed you around.
eerie, dark, love it! good job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Randall.
I am much humbled.
a word crawl of such night in the color of dirt, you spawned a specter in these sectioned off plots begging for light to expose the skeletal structure of the dark arts....great piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your amazing comments, I like feedback on how the reader felt.
Well, I am not su.. read more
Now, i may be wrong (known to happen at Black Jack 1 out 6 times) but this reminded me of something, live night moves, trying to make some front page driving news https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqwfaxYAH5o

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Well, maybe! lol
this was a nice one. I love the rhythmic feel to it. kind of eerie too, but pleasantly so.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

10 Years Ago

It's when love rots into hatred, grudge and remorse...

Thank you, Melecia.

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Added on November 14, 2013
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Tags: curse, ghost, pain, gothic, death, adam, dark, mirage, poetry

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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