Soul

when you feel like crap and you don�t know why

Why do you

 …love

 …hurt

 …care

 fall?

 

 angel with sharp wings

 

,when your dreams take shape in front of you

 

and you pushed sorrow far beyond the darkness  

 

Why?

 

when you know that what you seek lies inside

and nowhere else.   

 

Author's Note

Sure feels better after I wrote it. I think that writing is a good cure for sadness :).

A.M.

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

I'm glad you felt better after you wrote this, that's the reason why I write poetry; to express my feelings. That's also why I don't write new pieces for contests, it's because I can't unless I have some feeling at that moment that I need to express.

This was an interesting write, I haven't really seen many poems put in the format you have put your poem it, but it was interesting to see, so it added to this poem.

"angel with sharp wings" confuses me, but it sounded good, haha.
Thanks for sharing.
-Bryce

[Joe]

Powerful.

[♡Moon Child♡..]

I like writing when I feel sad or angry or upset...it helps to express my feelings so I know how you feel!^^
~Happy Writing!~

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

So true, to write away the pain is what I feel. In this write I can feel the loneliness your are feeling in that search for answers to happiness. Nice write.

[closed]

wow. you say a lot in very little words. in my opinion those are the best kind of poems, good write.

and i agree writing is an amazing treatment for sadness.

[Rhine Wolf]

nice! though i feel that there was more in it, but i liked it any way.

Blessed be.
Fallon

[The Mad Prophet]

It's not bad, very meaningful. You must had a lot on the mind when you wrote it. Very well done.

And thank you for the review.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

This is beautiful....
Written in lovely style with emotion and beauty

Lynda

[M Bester]

I love it, lets people fill in the blanks.

[Michael X]

Adela, this is heartfelt, you did a really nice job convincing the reader,
with a mix of style and form, the concept keeps its edge with imagery
and detail set to height, the title makes it a celestial poem in thought,
Great Job.