B'coz She's Gone !!

A gesture of Perpetual-Care that has taken shelter in my heart and my hands were unfolded before they could sculptor the cuddle, alive !!

Finally, he exclaimed:

"The ‘Beauty’ took shelter at my lap last night !

Yes, probably it was one of the purest forms of beauty, have ever witnessed ~~ yet unknown, hidden, transient !!

...…..the cuddle of vanishing dreams was about to wake up and saunter through a ‘Good bye’.  My wakeful eyes were waiting for the first ray of sunbeam to plummet at her eyes…. just to perceive the 'sleeping beauty' in my eyes forever the moment she would open her eyes ! Because this moment of ~purity~elegance~  will never come back, for sure!! 

Perhaps it’s the last best canvas that I had drawn in recent days gone by…because she’s gone for forever ?? ! ! ?? "

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With a promise to dream-in again ~ Adi

Author's Note

Welcome all types of comment+feedback !

Reviews

[¿]

I think we should wake up leaving the dreams even if it's sweet....if not then how will we see the sweeter and the sweetest?!
Lovely penned😊

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks for your words, you have made the prose even more positive with the sweet analogy of your view!!

[¿]

Wc😊.......!!

[Rahul]

That's a great write, but i felt sad when i read your last line. Tht's sad but it's a lovely and a sweet write that i've ever read by you. You seemed a great writer "Aditya", you gotta write and write more.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks Rahul....your words are motivating !!
The essence of this piece is written in the sub-title. Yes, undoubtedly it has the 'sadness' ......but that sadness probably itself the reason of the creation of this prose !

Cheers !!

[Rahul]

My pleasure... yeah, well said.. that sadness's not even an actual sadness that's an essence of love came from her lovely heart and converted into your words.

Cheers !! :)

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks Prritiy....Yes, '"a" was to be removed, jus realized !

[Prritiy]

nicely written.

was about to awake up- in this line shouldn't it be 'wake up'.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks for the comment !!

[ayosonolowo]

Very impressive
this is one of the big don
nice written
please keep it up