...So I volunteered to walk through the alleyway of her eyes !!

....trying to portray someone's pain ~ transparent, yet hidden !!

Ohh…. It seems that she has lost in her thoughts again….perhaps the reality has started larcenying her again and again!

She is forced to dry her every tear within her open eyes…. because she has the fear killing her own dreams which have a permanent shelter in her eyelids since many years. There is only one hope ~ to get him! but many dreams ~ to live with that one hope!!

She could have closed her burning eyes and let the searing magma burst out!! It would have been a much of relief than the pain she’s retaining within her eyes. But she didn’t, inspite of knowing the reality!!??

I heard ~ pain has its own lifespan, time persuades its existence! But is this the reason why she’s been able to be with her open eyes of pain?

Hhhmmmm….Naah ! I would not be convinced! Because this is her pain of core! Her scarlet eyes divulge it! If she is alive, her core is alive too! This pain cannot be mollified with the breeze that her open eyes seize everyday!     

Why has she hesitated to surrender herself to him when everything was for her, was in her favour? Was it the fear of losing him? Or ‘Every absolute thing has left-with-less to explore’ ~ was this the belief enchanted in her wits and she clogged herself being incomplete?

Things are still hidden! Reality is the loudest echo echo echo in her life now!

…..and finally I volunteered to walk through the alleyway that her eyes direct everyday ~ with a hope that I will find her source of pain and ‘the reality’ that soaks her into a desert!

………to be continued !

……with a promise to dream-in again ~ Adi      

Reviews

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Dedicated to every heart that has a pain, to every eye that has a hope, to every ear that listens the silence the best...... to every 'love' that needs a shelter, and to each life that needs an embrace of care & armament !! ...........................

[Prritiy]

wow. i loved it. you write beautifully.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks for your nice words ! Inspiring !

[Prritiy]

you are welcome

[Laminators Dubai]

very nice, it's a condition (that i never had) but know someone who had it.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks Harshita.

I wish......no one should ever feel and be in such conditions !!

[Laminators Dubai]

me too aditya.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Cheers Harshita,........... :)