An Asylum of Darkness !!

The shades of true feelings and strikes of real thoughts ~ when captured together to express the state of mind, having missed someone !!

An Asylum of Darkness !!

"....And I m missing the lass who was an asylum of my darkness of last gone by nights.....!!

                                                                Courtesy: Google Image !

It's again just an another night ! Steady, Murky, silent....yet a droll for me ~ as I always love the allure of Night ! But today? Something is missing..............!! I am missing that asylum which was pasted by her presence in the darkness of my few recent nights.

I thought over again and again, gyrated within the mixed emotions just to find a gist ~ why's her absence pinching me !!??   

But I am lost, silence has impeded interaction with me who used to be my best voice !! 

I have closed my eyes, shoved myself into the gloom. The brawny vivid memory of the recent night has taken just a jerk...........and reached the inception ! And slowly I have started relishing the 'asylum of this darkness'; again!

 ............ and perhaps I then realized ~ Yes, it was her who has embellished this 'Asylum' in this darkness and silently poured the sparkles of emotion......leaving me missed her !! It's not only because she sheltered within my cuddling arms, but because her hesitant touch and incomplete embrace had unknowingly crafted a core of belongingness in me !! 

And yes, it is the "Asylum of Darkness" ......hatched within my mind and thoughts ~ for forever !!  "

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With a promise to dream-in again ~ Adi 

Reviews

[Prritiy]

Yes, it was her who has embellished this 'Asylum' in this darkness and silently poured the sparkles of emotion......leaving me missed her !! It's not only because she sheltered within my cuddling arms, but because her hesitant touch and incomplete embrace had unknowingly crafted a core of belongingness in me !!

it happens when we are separated we realize what was so beautiful about that place, time was actually the person with whom we were. nice write.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

exactly Prritiy !! U r right .............this is what this prose wants to convey and embellish !!!

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Laminators Dubai]

huh... cold creepy manor
you let the word dance

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks.............it was just a try........but true feel......

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks for reviewing ! And for the nice compliment ! You have absolutely touched the subject of the Prose !! Thanks again!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is very interesting the writing style you used to write this wonderful poem. It talks about a person that is in psychological jail thinking about the person he desires. Great work, absolutely a favorite.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks Anika !!