The Edge of the World

She came to dance on the edge of the world, only to find her world was limitless.

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

Wow. Just wow.
I feel like this should be hung on a wall and meditated on.
Great line. :) A first place win would be well deserved here.

[Tex]

well done. You got my vote for the one line contest. my second favorite would make a great second line to this work

"...but sometimes the memories trail behind like tin cans, clanging loudly with each forward step..."

credit "Vesa Lee"

[Archia]

I thought that was so beautiful, just really beautiful. I loved so much what it was saying, it was just wonderful.

[Marie]

You're really good at this.