Trail of Broken Promises

Trail of Broken Promises

A Poem by XFallxEverX
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these 2 friends are girls and one of them is hoping that the other wont leave her. the other does and she finds a new friend to hang w/ after droppin her old friends friendship ring into the ocean.... pretty bitchy i no

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Invincible to the naked eye


Though ever at war in front of her


An internal battle never to be won


By friend nor foe


She watches with caution


She holds her hand


Grasping it tightly


In their intertwining fingers


She trembles with fear


Fear that hope is slipping away


Away from her so swiftly


Taken away from her


She brushes the girl's thin gold band


The symbol of their friendship


The symbol she gave


To leave such a thing in her care


Is to leave her heart within hers


Turning around, she recognizes


That one girl perched upon a wall


Her soul sister


Her hands unfold to reveal


A sapphire stone set in a gold band


Splitting her palms


It tumbles below


Into the ocean below


The symbol of love and friendship


Shattered by a moment of doubt


Such a minor trinket


With so much value


Suddenly replaced by the dark feelings


Of abandonment


She takes one last look at her


The girl held by a new angel


With flowing brown hair


Finally, she walks a trail of broken promises


The glossy path of unspoken betrayal

© 2009 XFallxEverX


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Added on December 6, 2009

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XFallxEverX
XFallxEverX

indianapoilis, IN



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im still in high skool but ever since i was young i wanted to write both poetry and stories about fantasy creatures and the world they live in. it might be considered crazy, but in my stories i talk o.. more..

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