Save Me

sadness sux and everyone knows that.. some ppl have a diff. way of showin it, however.

The tears may not be visible

But they are there

Upon my heart from which they casade

Need not to explain such things

Time itself may heal me

May renew my damaged soul

And force happiness to arise

From the darkest corners of my heart

Though it beats ever so vigorously

It is still oh so dead

The trobbing is painful

Against my chest

It's a reminder of this retched life

In which Ian forced to carry out

A gift would be joyous, and hearty

This is a putried curse

That has been set upon me

True happiness will never be felt

Unless someone delivers it to me

Chains of heartach tied around me

Bound me

In a small cage barred with blades

They're taunting me

I need to break free

But I don't know how

The real tears slide fast

I'm in real trouble now

I need help, I'm begging

Someone, anyone

Will you please save me?

Reviews

[Platus]

The blue writing hurts my eyes.

[tora]

that good i love how you put emotion in your poem good job