Coffee

This is a nonet about coffee.

Coffee   ( nonet )

 

Drinking coffee is an old routine
that may lure you like a siren
as you go from dull to keen
on this drug's trampoline,
a mind-blowing lean.
It's hard to wean
from a mean
caffeine
bean.

Reviews

[Emily]

I like it! I do love coffee! Well done.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Emily!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hahaha, I resemble that sonnet. Yes coffee is my drug of choice. Oh what a fun read.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for reviewing my triangular rhyming coffee nonet! So you're a mean caffeine bean too?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

11o percent hahaha

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok it doesn't say that much if its a rooster or a chick . Coffee bean what's that mean ...You are driving me nuts ...

[Aethereal]

Thanks for our sober review, Neil! I'm a little coffee bean ...seldom heard and seldom seen.

[NeiL ArandA]

Can you please translate that again in laymans term ...

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok you might be a coffee or caffeine dependent kind a guy or gal ? A reclusive brown spider ?

[Aethereal]

No, it's just that other people tend to get addicted to me to such a degree that things go out of control, and then I have to take matters into my own hands to defuse a bad situation before it gets worse. There aren’t many people such as I on this planet.

[NeiL ArandA]

ok I think I got it now .... coffee bean is a slang words for something

[NeiL ArandA]

You are one of a kind and not expandable... I like to be treated like that ...

[Aethereal]

A coffee bean subroutine makes dull computers keen.

[NeiL ArandA]

ok you are not a rooster or a chick but an artificial intelligent program that can interact with human ...ok I could somehow grasp that a little bit ...but something is not quite right here ...

[Aethereal]

Now your imagination is running away with you. Everyone knows that such a creative intelligences isn't possible yet, and if it did exist, it would be busy taking over the universe, and not a poetry forum.

[NeiL ArandA]

I think I figure you out ....

[Aethereal]

You think, therefore you are!

[Dr. Wood ?]

ditto Frieda really.......well constructed and clever wording....I was hooked.....

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Dr. Wood! Word play is my hobby.

[Frieda P]

Ha love it....very clever and so true! Amazing Aethereal....'mean caffeine bean'...must be the same brand I buy....

[Aethereal]

Thanks for reviewing my "mean caffeine bean" rhyming nonet, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Great one, I love the shape of it too, I can never manage to do concrete poetry

[Aethereal]

Mono-rhyming logical nonets with good form are the rarest of poems. I only know of the ones that I’ve written. Perhaps I should write more just in case they are the only ones that have ever been written, and ever will be written.

[Frieda P]

You should, too restrictive for me, the most I can handle is a Senryu...that's about all the structure I can take.

[Karen]

Awesome poem! Not just because it's about such a great topic but because the form is impeccable! I enjoy reading well-written, well-formed poetry, and this poem offers both!

[Aethereal]

Thanks for seeking out my coffee poem, and reviewing it, Karen! This is a rare form of poetry.

[Laura S.]

The way you worded this out is just mind blowing. Amazingly done :-)
Yay for coffee!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Laura! Coffee's good in moderation.

[Rahul]

What kinda writer you are...what a nice and beautiful creativity of writing. lovely piece and you served it in a unique way.
by the way, i love coffeee..lol

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Rahul! Whatever kind of writer I am, I don't know of any other like me. Each writer develops a unique style over time if they work at it.

[Rahul]

That's a nice reply and you really well said.