Nature

This is a poem that I wrote about Nature for a contest whereby I relate Nature to life.

Nature

 

How would Nature ever know

of her graceful might,

but for living things who grow

hugging her charms tight?

 

Deep within her undertow

powered by her light,

ears and eyes form to bestow

her with sound and sight.

 

Though her processes are slow,

she finds just the right

living things that overflow

every gainful site.

 

Life is meant to overthrow

voids of self delight

basking Nature in the glow

that our minds ignite.

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Beautiful penned....we take nature for granted ...we must pay attention as nothing is more beautiful:)

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, SyberRose!

We're Nature's eyes,
and all her ears,
all her laughter,
all her tears.
We're her voice,
but that's our choice.

[SyberRose]

Very nice indeed..:)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Lovely write my dear friend

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Fanatical Dreamer!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Tremendous poem> I love the idea of eyes,ears noses etc telling Nature how lovely she is.
And the more we write about it the better!!!

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Great Aunt Astri! We are one of Nature's mirrors upon herself. What's the use in her existence if Nature isn't aware of it.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes. I had never thought of it that way. Sadly though, Nature can goon existing even if every human became extinct!

[Aethereal]

We just keep popping in and out of Nature throughout all eternity so that Nature may be aware of every aspect of herself. Nature just recycles us by placing us on other paths of enlightenment. The best is yet to come. We're eternal adventurers.

[lee von cleef]

Pen points paint the path'
Pin pricks pierce our pain,
Peter-Pan pockets promises ,
Nature bends time to dance with diversity...

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your poetic review, lee! Great little poem.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write on Nature. Some good thoughts and imagery too...:)

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Sami! It's not difficult to find imagery within Nature.

[Sami Khalil]

You are so right...Welcome...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

A glorious ode to Nature, Aethereal. I like the uplifting feel to this piece - Beautiful poetry!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Rita! Poets love writing odes to Nature. There must be thousands of 'em.

[Tom]

Captivating imaginary here in this poem, kudos indeed as to the way you depict (mother) nature as an entity of all the beautiful scenes described therein!

Super poem !

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, Tom! The mind through which Nature reflects upon herself evolves as us and others.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nature is life. I f we love our own lives, we must love nature.

I love personification as the literary device used. Nature is really classified like a woman for like a mother, it nurtures us with so much love by it's richness we are enjoying while we live.
Nice choice of words. Wonderful!

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, Dhaye! We are personifications of Nature. We are how Nature personifies herself so that she may be aware of herself. What good is there in being beautiful if your don't know it? What good is there in existing if you don't know that you exist?

[icelandicblue]

This is a wonderful job of personifying nature. She can be both graceful and delightful. I enjoyed your imagery and the upbeat feel of the whole poem.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, blue! We're part of the personification that Nature gives to herself so she may be aware of her graceful and delightful herself.

[MOON]

Lovely write about the beauty of nature lovely flow .