Dust to Dust

Dust to Dust

A Poem by Aethereal
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About the beginning and end of a love affair.

"

Dust to Dust

 

 

Twirling specks of dust

dance inside our view

with that wanderlust

that once held us too.

 

Pirouette,

play roulette

till sunset.

 

Once a lovely gust,

powerful and true,

joined the two of us

into something new.

 

A strong jet

may beget

a duet.

 

Underneath our crust,

our devotions grew.

Wonder, love, and trust

filled us through and through.

 

Once we met,

our kismet

was reset.

 

Finally we were thrust

into a hot flue

that made us combust

into residue.

 

This upset

made us sweat,

and forget.

© 2014 Aethereal


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a cool simple "tell it like it is" write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, MeOnlyMe!
Once we met,
our kismet
was reset.


Loved this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Ance!
A very unique and creative way to describe the beginning and ending of relationships.
I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Tina! Everything in our universe is in some kind of relationship with everyt.. read more
Great poem! It was beautifully written. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Tinderfox!
"Once we met,
our kismet
was reset.

Finally we were thrust
into a hot flue
that made us combust
into residue.

This upset"

Intelligent, rhythmic and robust. You do it perfect...:)..................

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well read. ( Still spoken by 300 million people and 1.6 billion Muslim as their sec.. read more
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

I wonder how many Arabic words have no English translation? Perhaps they're only translatable thorou.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

I wonder too. A good book to write or even poem. Sands of confusion...:)..................
well WOW is all I can say meters it seems like they
where making love and Immerged together and you
my friend Expand it so Elegantly and Beautifully.



So Elegant and Beautifully and Intelligently penned.



Thank you for sharing this Intelligent lovely piece.

And thank you for your lovely review.





I loved these stanza's lines.


Wonder, love, and trust

filled us through and through.


Strong love and trust Bonded us Hmm...

You're Inspiring me my friend will Muse on
these thoughts.


Blessings. kindred poet




Posted 9 Years Ago


Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Very Intelligent words I love how you word your views and poems.

you have a way with wo.. read more
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Blessed are those who nurture Gardens of Poetic Delights.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

So Beautiful Thank you :) so very true I agree with you
amazing writing !
loved it !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Sasha! I'm glad that you like it.
Wonderful write, that captures beauty even in dust... when seen glittering through rays of light it can be quite lovely in my opinion. Your gorgeous meter plays well throughout your poem and is a true display of your brilliance, yet again. Love this, you continue to amaze me with your work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for you detailed review, Kalypso! Those beams of light that make all things visible would nev.. read more
Ghost of Jupiter

9 Years Ago

Such lovely images you paint, it is a delight to read your thoughts.
Once we met,
our kismet
was reset.

Superb rhyming.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Pryde! Kismet begins with a touch.
Pryde Foltz

9 Years Ago

Smiling…………...
This is a very good poem. I enjoyed reading this today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, wllweb!

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Added on May 28, 2014
Last Updated on May 28, 2014
Tags: dust, gust, love, dance, combustion

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