Research Notes

Research Notes

A Poem by Aethereal
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Research notes on the mystery of Death.

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Research Notes

 

Death is an experiment

Science should not miss.

It’s our way to implement

paths to Hell or Bliss.

 

Careful notes should supplement

Satan’s deep abyss,

or the faithful compliment

of an Angel’s kiss.


© 2014 Aethereal



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Is there a third choice in this experiment. Maybe other options.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love the approach on this poem. The imagination is superb, and a very different take on Heaven and hell with death being the bridge. I'd say this poem is outstanding.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I am really liking these short philosophical pieces from you. Wonderful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow.. !
This is absolutely amazing !

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Sasha!
"Death is an experiment
Science should not miss.
It’s our way to implement
paths to Hell or Bliss."

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Sami! Perhaps Death takes us where our love is?
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Yep . You are welcome...:).... .
Hmnn...short but something deep and profound. It's a very difficult research...
Interesting piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Dhaye! Every moment must die in order to bring forth the next for life woul.. read more
Be carful what we study so we do not become obsessed with the lies "Death" holds... Life seems to hold a lasting truth as you so well show in the "Angel's kiss".
This contradiction of "Hell or Bliss" is worthy of consideration.
Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your thoughtful review, David! No one really knows what occurs within the Quantum Vacuum .. read more
I must say you have very well researched on this objective death... the inference is crystal clear.Your works will lead to heaven or hell. i liked the clever way you've portrayed death as an experiment must for our human species.. Few lines yet full of wisdom.well done :)

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, Sophy!

More Miltonian details:

There .. read more
Interesting and well expressed eternal question we have all pondered.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, John! Death seems to be a one-way journey such as the journey of useful ener.. read more
That was very true and expressed in a very attractive way.
you gave a great idea about death and the two paths we face . well done :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, stars are far! Here's a 'lil poem that just came to me:
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Drif.. read more

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