Research Notes

Research Notes

A Poem by Aethereal
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Research notes on the mystery of Death.

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Research Notes

 

Death is an experiment

Science should not miss.

It’s our way to implement

paths to Hell or Bliss.

 

Careful notes should supplement

Satan’s deep abyss,

or the faithful compliment

of an Angel’s kiss.

© 2014 Aethereal


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Has weight, almost scary!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Afred! I didn't mean to scare anyone. Perhaps there's a third path, the path.. read more
Life is a test and a choice in our own hands, where we want to go after death!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, A. Amos! But since we're forced to choose, is it really free will? We're for.. read more
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome...
Death i don't fear it just the pain right before it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

It's always a good idea to thank one's muse for all wisdom gained. Your muse is your friend, your lo.. read more
Michael G. Smith

9 Years Ago

I have to say that to me Jesus Christ is no mystery. He reveals all to us about His plan of Salvatio.. read more
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

But the entity to which Jesus refers has always been a mystery, a burning bush, a nameless rose in t.. read more
A call to study as an experiment the science of death. A powerful write and call...Bravo..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Sami! Everything is being pulled into a more focused perspective ( its sourc.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)..........
a beautifully quoted write.. plays with words well.. with a decent flow helps one confront the reality of death and paths to heaven or hell.. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Gurleen! We each take the path that we need for grow. Some need to sail thro.. read more
Gurleen Saluja

9 Years Ago

Yes true that.. Your words reflect if originally.. :)
It is tough for me to enetrtain so much in very few lines but you seem to have that ability. Wether it is one or the other obvious differences in paths but other than a science which would accept imaginative thinking sure we are lost and not even capable to formulate a what if. If it was left to me I'll go for the angels kiss but that's just me a sucker afterall....

Packed with thought this

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aethereal

9 Years Ago

Thanks for being the first to give this poem a detailed review, Rene! Most children, kittens, and pu.. read more
Rene Salinas

9 Years Ago

Oh no better embrace the other option then I ll get my shovel and flashlight ready

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Added on July 29, 2014
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