Cloud

Cloud

A Poem by Aethereal
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Cloud vanishing.

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Cloud

 

Some doors must close

in order that others may open

as fragmental moments of my life

are left behind

so as to keep abandoned

cold empty spaces aglow.

 

A cloud dissipates

into the aether

never to cry again …


© 2014 Aethereal



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Yes, past memories do seem to like vanishing clouds. I bet they are glad to be free! Lovely poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I very much like the idea of abandoned cold empty spaces. If I have read you correctly, you are now de-fragmented, aglow and ready to go. Perhaps, I need some de-fragmentation, myself? A nifty poem!


Posted 2 Years Ago


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You have made the beauty of nature seem more surreal than the metaphors you are using. A door opening is like a cloud forming and a door closing id a cloud evaporating, this poem has very good construction and levels of meaning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Every thing and everyone has its purpose on Earth… small or big, everything s of equal importance.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nicely done. Moving from the past, at least those grown dim.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is just filled with emotion. It really is beautiful and touching.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is probably my favourite of yours I have ever read. What a strong piece, so succinct, and beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


i agree with Anahat...last 3 lines are fantastic.

Posted 3 Years Ago


loved the last three lines..Absolutely beautiful :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


wow this brief poem hold so much wisdom.
A cloud dissipates
into the aether
never to cry again …

awesome

Posted 3 Years Ago



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