A warning from Beyond the Grave

I have seen it all, I have seen the sun give way to the night, the dawn no longer Rise. I've seen spirits from Beyond walk in shadows, they grow stronger under the moonlight.

- I should have heeded their warnings, I should have never come to this place -

I'm afraid this will be my grave, I will never get a chance to touch my daughter's hair again or to kiss my wife goodnight.

It's so cold all of a sudden... my Lenten is about to go out... with no light they will come for me...

If you find this note on my...body turn back....there is nothing for you here in this cursed place....

Reviews

[PandaPeaceful]

I like it. Suspense and terror follow after each line. Maybe instead of the punctuation marks simply put a comma. Good job though! I look forward to reading more of your writing.