Ignoring and getting ignored

Ignoring and getting ignored

A Poem by Agnibo
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Wrote this just a few days back. :)

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Memories fade like dust in air.
Ignorance takes over all due care.
Smiles get faker day-by-day.
'Hmm, Okay', is all that's left to say.

'Contacts' remain just another number,
No calls or messages whatsoever.
Spending night gets harder with time
Yet the same lie, 'I am all fine.'

© 2017 Agnibo



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truth about life man, All friends that we have in schools and collages will say that they will keep in touch and will reply only when we sent a message.

its a world of competition and everyone is on a race. that's why noone have time for others

Simple and sweat

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

7 Months Ago

I am really, really happy that you could relate my poem to the exact thing I thought nind while writ.. read more



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True words right there. I could totally relate to what you were saying in this poem. As I'm sure we all can. Well written! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


So sad. So true how this happens. It's good to record these sorrows in poetry, for ourselves or for others who can't put words on their ache. The next to the last line should probably read 'the night' or 'a night' to make it correct. Good write! I.I.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Life can become harder. We must something worthwhile to do. We do keep fake face and tell lies to be left alone. I felt the disappointment and the anger in the poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


This poem is absolutely true and relatable. With the modern world, it gets hard to differentiate between fake and real! Keep it up :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


So many true words are in this piece, and its so very sad when these things start to take place.
You do see the fake smiles, the 'Ill stay in touch, the yeah I'm doing Ok line starts to come out a lot.

Friendships do turn to dust along with many empty promises of saying in touch.

A truthful piece and it makes you ask why cant this world be a better place.

Mark.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Yes. That's so true. I can totally relate to it. I guess that's the truth in today's world. Beautifully written I loved it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Agnibo

7 Months Ago

I am really happy that you can relate to it. :) And, it's indeed true in today's world.
Than.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
truth about life man, All friends that we have in schools and collages will say that they will keep in touch and will reply only when we sent a message.

its a world of competition and everyone is on a race. that's why noone have time for others

Simple and sweat

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

7 Months Ago

I am really, really happy that you could relate my poem to the exact thing I thought nind while writ.. read more

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Agnibo
Agnibo

Assam, India



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Hello! I am Agnibo Chakrabory. I am from India. I am a wanna be poet and novelist. I love Composing poems of various forms. Amoung my favourite poems, I love the poem, "Don't stant at my grave and wee.. more..

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