Where are you, Father?

Where are you, Father?

A Poem by Agnibo
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This piece is about a child who does not know that his/her father is no more and still awaits him.

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Where are you, Father?
Have you left me for ever?
Is there something I lack?
Is so you aren't yet back?
Don't you you love me?
Or is that my love you can't see?
Why are you taking so long?
Is there something wrong?
Father, please, come back,
I can't be anymore strong.

© 2017 Agnibo



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The Feeling in these lines are so immense that will fill your heart with love and pain.
It relates to everyone who are in search of a father's love and who is very weak that he needs his support.
Very genuine writing. Keep writing:)

Posted 1 Week Ago


The writing is precise and the underlying thought is put in a way that it is relatable and easily felt.
That is a biggest achievement for a writer. Rest of technicalities you can always improve on as you write more..
Keep up the good work 😊👍 Happy Writing :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


I feel the sorrow. It's a lovely display of poetry, but I think some of the English is a bit off, if you can search that out. Thank you for allowing me to read :) I.I.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Agnibo

1 Week Ago

I am happy you could connect to it. :)
Yes, I will try to correct the English. Thanks for rea.. read more
Isabella Ivy

1 Week Ago

It was my pleasure :)
I was raised-up by kind Grandparent. I had a AWOL father. Hard to grasp when you are young. You father had left your life. The words solid and the feel of real emotion and regret. Thank you Agnibo for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


Agnibo

1 Week Ago

Yes, Cryote! That's really hard to believe when you are young.
Thank you, Coyote. :) I am gla.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Days Ago

Absence without leave. Old Army term and you are welcome.
My reviews are normally fairly constructive, but for this piece i will use just one word as my review and that word is.......touching.

Mark.


Posted 1 Week Ago


Agnibo

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much, Mark. :)
This is so well written! See now you've made me emotional😢😢

Posted 1 Week Ago


Agnibo

1 Week Ago

Aww!! That's the best compliment. I always wanted to make people emotional, happy, laughing etc. :)<.. read more
Sonakshi Arora

1 Week Ago

Haha yep! Great job...
Agnibo

1 Week Ago

Thanks, Sonakshi! :)
So heart touching. It feels devastating to lose ones parents. I liked the true emotions you have written.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Agnibo

1 Week Ago

Yes, you are right. It feels so devastating to lose the once we love.
I am happy that you co.. read more
Najam Us Saher

1 Week Ago

You're welcome ☺

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Added on March 17, 2017
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Tags: Father, love

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Agnibo
Agnibo

Assam, India



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Hello! I am Agnibo Chakrabory. I am from India. I am a wanna be poet and novelist. I love Composing poems of various forms. Amoung my favourite poems, I love the poem, "Don't stant at my grave and wee.. more..

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