Purgatory - a life worse than hell

A girl's
Joy and sorrow
Lies deep
Deep in the soul

Her innocent heart
Her cute little smile
Are Precious gifts
The world ever have

Filling her with utmost pain
The agony that is eternal
Pounce upon like animals
Can't you see
She's a human!

Torture she bears
The anguish of grief
Aloud She cannot say
Inside she weep
Can't you see
She's a human!

Her soul breaks
She's no more now
Everything has disappeared
Her sound of laughter
To a mere feel of touch
An alive oblivion

Atleast now
Can't you see
She's a human!

Reviews

[JulianaSun]

Suffering can make our lives a living hell. Or purgatory - which is the lesser evil. There´s so much deep seeded pain in your poem. The verses sound like screams of despair.

[Sparsa Chowdary]

Pain could be forgotten, but mental suffering is the worst thing in the world. There are many victims to this. Hope people understand and act with ' humanity ' with others as we are all humans. Thank you for your kind review

[A.D Edwards]

I get the idea you're trying to convey and i think its a great msg, but to be honest there were some conflict of tenses that threw me off a bit

[Sparsa Chowdary]

Thank you so much for the review...yaa I'll make sure that I come up with better piece of writing., thanks again

[A.D Edwards]

My pleasure :) keep writing