Empty Crowd

"what are we waiting for?"

Empty crowd

Acres and acres of land lay barren

Barren yet filled with loads of people

 

Dry leaves there lay on the bed 

The unfortunate deaths which haven’t yet

 

Thrives there lies and blind believers

Seeking hope from the destiny makers

Yet no reply comes from the heavens

For, to say lacks there education

 

-       Ahena Mk 

Author's Note

Lets literate the illiterate ....

Reviews

[mahima]

A nice message conveyed through a Wonderful poem!!!!
Just loved it :-)

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

Nice, Depth, Wonderful poem. This would be awesome to be expounded on.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

i can just say "wow"!!!!
its sad that there are people who wait life times for heavens to reply them...

[Ahena MK]

True... Thanks for reading

[DIVYA]

Very well written. Thanks for sharing.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading

[writ rajat]

fantASTIC ever fan mAKING wonderful poem

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed, what are we waiting for? Good concept, well penned, Ahena

[Ahena MK]

Thank you .....

[Odysseus Wanders]

Literacy as the gateway to heaven... love it.
Nice poem Ahena... solid message, hidden just enough...
I find hope in the poem, the unfortunate deaths that haven't yet... still time... somehow.
Cool. Nice.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ..

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A marvelous idea and a great poem!

[Ahena MK]

Thank you...

[Rida Sarwar]

very deep and really meaningful :)

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!!

[Rida Sarwar]

welcome :)

[Tam Warink]

...and there are many different kinds of education. You paint a stark picture, Ahena. Barren and overflowing with potential abundance. Is it the "blind believers" or the "destiny makers" that seem to stand in the way? Perhaps... but, there is also a sense of shared responsibility that goes unmentioned. The remedy is prepared but who will administer the knowledge? What knowledge will be selected? Who will answer these questions, implicit in this work?

100 hope seekers

[Ahena MK]

I have left the reader to fill in and imagine extra things ... I purposely tried making it dilute as thats something I often dont... Wanted to try it out !!! Thanks for reading ....
Ahena :)