2 Olives

2 olives

“Mr. and Mrs. Olives”

Strangers we have heard on high

coming close he becomes mine           

I say this with a sigh     

but Mrs. Ginger married the guy

No more Ginger now Oliver

I say so with a strange quiver

Locked up in a room they sit             

no socializing, not even a bit                                         

inside I peep, see a candle lit                  

and a big pumpkin that seems bit

“Mr. and Mrs. Olives it says

on the door since the past few days                                 

both seems happy and pretty gay                              

they are honeymooning in may

A descent couple they don’t smoke    

no drinks, says the old bloke       

sit around, little they joke                          

just some tea not even coke

Mr. and Mrs. Oliver     

the best couple ever           

since times never                                  

I say so with a shiver 

Ahena Mk 

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Did you mean "decent" instead of "descent"?
Does "may" need a capital letter?

Otherwise a very sweet write. I like that there is no punctuation. It gives the Mr. and Mrs. more definition.
A

[Rida Sarwar]

loved this one ;) extremely romantic :)

[Ahena MK]

Thank you !!!

[Sami Khalil]

I like the story although short and the romance in it. Good couple for a story...:).............

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:).................

[My Favorite Writer !]

Very nicely written ! I enjoyed the reading :)

[Ahena MK]

Thanks ;) ...

[Rachelle]

I guess it just ends with an aging couple spending their days in tolerance and patient friendship if they work on the relationship to make it last that long….. but then, that in itself, is a great achievement already….
Kudos!

[Ahena MK]

Hahaha .. True , thanks for reading ;

[prachi prangya agasti]

brought a smile on my face..... liked...!!!

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ... ;)

[Pryde Foltz]

Mr. and Mrs. Oliver
the best couple ever
since times never
I say so with a shiver

I got a chuckle and smile out of this one.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ;)

[writ rajat]

“Mr. and Mrs. Olives it says

on the door since the past few days

both seems happy and pretty gay

they are honeymooning in may
I want to know its meaning rest are excellent

[Ahena MK]

Oh ... It's basically the life of an old couple .... thanks for reading ...

[Saddam]

A phenomenal work dear. Simply genius. Great read.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ;)