hurtful depart

to love and to be loved on an agreed timeline

and we decided to live a different life just for a moment. ..

We agreed we will have limits
We agreed we will have no regrets
We agreed we will open our mind and soul
We agreed we will follow our hearts
We agreed we will live in this dream until time allows

We expressed how we feel,
We expressed what we want
We expressed how we want
We expressed how much we want to hav each other in our arms
We expressed our desire to taste the love,

Yet we promise to keep our promise remembering that we belong NOT to each other,
We agree to depart with a smile on our face,
We agreed to treasure the moment until eternity,

and yet again the drops of happiness...
came down to earth...
Each having its own purpose,
With an promise to re-growth.

the silence in the promise that had not been expressed...
the craving inside , even though we had a promise,
was in loose, when i got lost in your breath,
was mesmerised by your smile
was hypnotized by your eyes
was addicted to ur smell
never had a real comprehension of the depth and breadth of my vulnerability
atlast the least wish to hold your hand in mine

Author's Note

am not a writer , someone who is trying to express how he is feeling at the moment. so please bare with the errors in my writing

Reviews

[Suhd]

Nothing wrong with the style of writing just beware of the typos and revise several times. A very nice poem :)

[Ah'sunaM]

thanks Shud

[Suhd]

It's Suhd.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I feel the passion in your words. They are eloquent and expressive. You speak from your heart as good poets do. I would encourage you to work on grammar and spelling. You have great promise as a writer so keep writing!

[Ah'sunaM]

will work on that and thank you for reading