Beautiful

To love you was not a choice
it just happened
i say we were destined
to walk on the same path
to heal your soul with care
to fill those wounds with love
yet to depart is a choice made
against the beautiful fate
I keep on wishing on every shooting star that crosses my eyes
a wish to have you as mine
if i had a say in that choice of yours
i would have asked you to stay forever
still am not letting you go
if only u know much you mean to me
how beautiful my life is
when am with u...

Author's Note

not a writer, just trying to put my thoughts out there

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

'I keep on wishing on every shooting star that crosses my eyes'. Yes, I think you have portrayed the feeling of wishing even when choices were made against 'the beautiful fate, very well. And I like the simply put ending. 'how beautiful my life is, when I am with u.'
I will read more of your poems.

[Ah'sunaM]

thank u 😊

[Ah'sunaM]

thank u 😊

[Great Aunt Astri]

You are welcome. :}

[Suhd]

This piece is lacking the real content. There are mistakes in it. A careless write.

[EJ's Horror]

I think it's beautiful, but towards the end, I personally found it a bit clingy, but I'm very new to poetry. Good job!

[Minerva]

To write your thoughts is important. Keep at it :)

[Ah'sunaM]

Thank you 😎