#MY DEAR BEST FRIEND!!!

My dear best friend,
If i die tomorrow,
It's not that i didn't think about you!!
If i leave you alone,
It doesn't mean that i didn't try
but it's just that i couldn't
find a reason to fight anymore!!!!
If i die tomorrow,
Don't worry
About me not there in your happiness
or sadness ;
Rather i would be watching over you!!
When i'll see you happy,
I'll smile nd sun will shine brightest
and when you'll be sad,
I'll go mad nd it will rain hardest!!
If i die tomorrow,
and you find yourself alone
just walk up to my grave
and there you'll find me!!
You'll find my yin pendent,
just then put your yang pendent
next to mine......
and you'll see that circle will be completed!!!......
So,
My dear best friend,
If i die tomorrow
don't hurry to meet me,
'coz when we'll do
We'll be in better place.....
and i'll have lot to share....
about as usual.....
And don't forget that
I still love you!!!!

Author's Note

Plz try to ignore grammatical errors nd i hope u all like it....

Reviews

[Fluffyy]

This poem is so cute! I bet your best friend cried over it. I mean I would if I saw this :)

[anonymous_at]

Wish she had same way thinking as you do....rather she yawned over it.... although she isn't with me anymore ND has left me long time ago....but still I fight a battle every second thoughts thinking wether should I hate or forgive her..... whatever I hope you won't leave your best friend.....btw Don't that no that I'm judging you cause I really don't know you but I go around telling every one that matter how your best friend is towards you but don't just leave them .......'cause best friends are those who accept you for who you are....

[Moonie]

It's a nice poem, very emotive! Good writing!

[anonymous_at]

Thanks a lot....but to be honest my own ex best friend found it void.....

[Pratik Mishra]

Nice one once again, well expressed.
Can you write one that rhymes? that would be good.
:)

[anonymous_at]

thank you for visiting and yes, i will try to write a poem which rhymes.....although this idea did cross through my mind but then i tried a lot .....and couldn't come up with any poems...but i will surely try to write one....sometime...well thanks once again for your opinion and review....:)

[Thedreamer16]

Beautifully written..felt it from my heart 😍

[anonymous_at]

Thanks a lot for taking out your time to read this poem nd sending constructive review.... :)

[shruthi]

Nice thoughts...great work

[anonymous_at]

Thank you :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The last turns out to be amazing in this beautiful prose. Feelings personified..

[anonymous_at]

Thnks a lot :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome a lot :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Me and my best friend would always ask each other in a humourous way 'will you come at my funeral?'
This poem reminded me about it. I really liked this it shows care and true concern for a friend. Keep it up. Write and share more.

[anonymous_at]

i'm glad that u really liked my poem......well whenever i go through this poem it always reminds me of that time when i was under depression nd my best friend was way too afraid of loosing me .....so she would spend whole time with me nd she did give me that yin-yang pendent nd she has the yang part while i've yin one !!!thnk u for encouraging me :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are lucky to have a friend who cares a lot about you. Hope you are fine.
You are most welcome. ☺

[anonymous_at]

Thnks a lot.... I'm fine now... Nd ya everybody is jealous of me nd her :) we are friendship goals!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay..You're welcome.

[Anshuman Aryav]

outstanding...I love each and every line....and last lines were amazing..
keep thinking....keep writing..
All the best..

[anonymous_at]

thnk u so much for giving review nd taking out time to read my writing......

[Anshuman Aryav]

My pleasure..

[anonymous_at]

honest reviews are welcome......so that i can improve myself!!!:)

[anonymous_at]

thanks a lot for taking out your time to read my poem .......although im sorry for replying way too late 'cause i wasn't using my account anymore