#MY DEAR BEST FRIEND!!!

#MY DEAR BEST FRIEND!!!

A Poem by anonymous_at

My dear best friend,
If i die tomorrow,
It's not that i didn't think about you!!
If i leave you alone,
It doesn't mean that i didn't try
but it's just that i couldn't
find a reason to fight anymore!!!!
If i die tomorrow,
Don't worry
About me not there in your happiness
or sadness ;
Rather i would be watching over you!!
When i'll see you happy,
I'll smile nd sun will shine brightest
and when you'll be sad,
I'll go mad nd it will rain hardest!!
If i die tomorrow,
and you find yourself alone
just walk up to my grave
and there you'll find me!!
You'll find my yin pendent,
just then put your yang pendent
next to mine......
and you'll see that circle will be completed!!!......
So,
My dear best friend,
If i die tomorrow
don't hurry to meet me,
'coz when we'll do
We'll be in better place.....
and i'll have lot to share....
about as usual.....
And don't forget that
I still love you!!!!

© 2017 anonymous_at



Author's Note

anonymous_at
Plz try to ignore grammatical errors nd i hope u all like it....

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Nice one once again, well expressed.
Can you write one that rhymes? that would be good.
:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


anonymous_at

1 Month Ago

thank you for visiting and yes, i will try to write a poem which rhymes.....although this idea did c.. read more
Beautifully written..felt it from my heart 😍

Posted 2 Months Ago


anonymous_at

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for taking out your time to read this poem nd sending constructive review.... :)
Nice thoughts...great work

Posted 2 Months Ago


anonymous_at

2 Months Ago

Thank you :)
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Sky
The last turns out to be amazing in this beautiful prose. Feelings personified..

Posted 2 Months Ago


anonymous_at

2 Months Ago

Thnks a lot :)
Sky

2 Months Ago

Welcome a lot :)
Me and my best friend would always ask each other in a humourous way 'will you come at my funeral?'
This poem reminded me about it. I really liked this it shows care and true concern for a friend. Keep it up. Write and share more.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

You are lucky to have a friend who cares a lot about you. Hope you are fine.
You are most we.. read more
anonymous_at

2 Months Ago

Thnks a lot.... I'm fine now... Nd ya everybody is jealous of me nd her :) we are friendship goals!.. read more
Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Okay..You're welcome.
outstanding...I love each and every line....and last lines were amazing..
keep thinking....keep writing..
All the best..

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

anonymous_at

2 Months Ago

thnk u so much for giving review nd taking out time to read my writing......
Anshuman Aryav

2 Months Ago

My pleasure..
honest reviews are welcome......so that i can improve myself!!!:)

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Well.. I'm 16 yrs old...i'm sick nd tired of hiding my past... So i want it to be out there in front of everyone... Though you might find many grammatical errors.... So don't mock at them... Although .. more..

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