#NEW BEGINNIN' !!!!

I wanted a new beginnin' ,

never knew

it had been so hard!!!

                       Leavin' all behind,

                       Forgettin' all i had

                       Tryin' all the options,

                       Givin' all my best,

                       Creatin' all over new person.......

i wanted a new beginnin' 

never knew 

it had been so hrad!!!

                      New beginnin' might be hard.....

                      but once started

                      will be better, next time........

Reviews

[barleygirl]

You have captured the exact blend of being a little scary, but also being exciting, this need for change! I used to feel the same way in my younger days! Anything new would be better! Fondly, Margie

[Moonie]

New beginnings and changing one's ways can always be hard...and still we all hope for new beginnings, for the slate to be wiped clear...
Good writing! :))

[anonymous_at]

Ya exactly.... Knowing that new beginning is gonna be hard.... Yet we go for it.... Cause we want to loose everything we had in past... And start afresh all by ourself... Well that what happened with me... Although thanks for stopping by and reviewing my work..... :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The title I wanted a new beginning is great. Everyone wants to start something new in life. The best way & day to do it is "Today" :)

[anonymous_at]

Thanks a lot for ur review......:)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

A very great words of admonishment to starter. I so much love the content. Really encouraging. Well done.

[anonymous_at]

Thank you so much for taking out your time to go through my poem and reviewing..... Well it's was exactly what i went through.... When i started all new.... So i thought better pen it down.... Glad u liked it... :)

[anonymous_at]

honest and constructive reviews are accepted....... :)please try to ignore grammatical errors ...if any....hope everyone likes this poem....