# FROM FLAW TO FLAWLESS!

"sometimes we are so much bought by one's outer beauty.....that we tend to forget what that person may look like from inside...."

I might don't have straight blond hair

but baby, i do look wonderful......

in my light brunette wavy hair!

I might not be as intelligent as she is

but yes, i'm creative and intelligent .....

in my arena ; as she is in her's!

I might not be as brave enough as her

but definitely, i do have strength.....

to hold both of us!

I might not wear small black dress like her

but honey, i do look fabulous....

 in my black faded high waist jean and white sweatshirt...

I might night not  be as flawless as her

but my dear, i won't regret it.....

'cause from my flaws i become unique!

so,

you might think that i ain't perfect

but listen, in my imperfections.....

i look perfect!

and

if you don't want me....

i'll still love you!!

if you make those silly mistakes

i'll still forgive you.....unlike her

'cause it's one of my flaws.....

'cause priyam, you are ONE OF MY MISTAKE... 

Reviews

[Haneefah]

This is a great piece anonymous. In a world where we find ourselves today, people with greater flaws do not want those with smaller flaws

[sette]

amazing poem, the love for oneself, being secure are two believable traits.

[anonymous_at]

Thanks a lot for reading work.... :)
And yes, these are those two things for which we quite fall for way too easily...

[emmajoy]

Tis corny these days to compare a human being to a flower, a star, a thought that changes but shines in whatever weather.. sparkling in rain, trembling in the wind, etc. BUT is true. We are each what we are, can be, could be and believe me, always loved by someone, somewhere. Seeing and findings is the believing! There ends my first sermon, but, smilingly delivered.. Add S to your final word?

[McEltic]

You only need the love of those who love you as they find you... as it should be :)

[anonymous_at]

You are 100% right....but not all are blessed to have someone by their side....
Thanks a lot for reading my work and for reviewing it..... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry. Your words and statements. Made the situation come alive. You can make the words gain life and interesting. Perfect flow of description led to a amazing ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[anonymous_at]

Your kind and encouraging review are welcomed.... :).
Thank you so much for taking out your time to read my work and to review it...
:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure. I enjoy your work and you are welcome.

[anonymous_at]

Glad to hear that..... :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

My favorite wardrobe sweatshirt and jeans. You are a whole human being and that is in itself the wonder of the soul.

regards,
al

[anonymous_at]

Hell yeah! Sweatshirt and jeans are my all time favorite.
..btw thanks a lot for your review.... :)

[Arya]

Love yourself the way you are, nice msg!

[anonymous_at]

Thank you so much... :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are unique and special just as you are. We need validation from within. Keep it up.

[anonymous_at]

Ya we do need that but it would be best if we have someone by our side too, to give that validation; even if it's just one person , it's more than enough..
.isn't it!???!!!.......but unfortunately not all are that lucky....

Btw thanks for taking out time to read my work.... :)

[Sami Khalil]

If it is someone you trust. For others can lie to you. You are welcome.

[anonymous_at]

Ya, you are right....

[Sami Khalil]

:).................

[Najam Us Saher]

Never compare yourself dear. I liked how better you are from her. The contrast you've drawn to explain your imperfections makes you different and above her.

[anonymous_at]

Thank you very much.... It really encouraging for me.... Although to truthful........for the boy i wrote actually thinks I'm ugly nd not his type..... Well let's leave that crap... Thanks for taking out your time to review my poem..... :)

[Najam Us Saher]

If he told you so, remember he is not worth you.
I had exams so I delayed for a while to read all the pending requests. You are welcome and I thank you for your patience :)

[anonymous_at]

No problem..... :) even i have exams..... I can understand.... How precious time becomes for us during exam days 😂😂😂...

[Najam Us Saher]

Haha yeah. 😀

[lostinthewaves]

love your imperfections! you are perfect the way you are.

Love,
lostinthewaves

[anonymous_at]

Thanks for encouraging..... :) keep visiting.... I hope you like my another new poem.... :)