# FROM FLAW TO FLAWLESS!

# FROM FLAW TO FLAWLESS!

A Poem by anonymous_at
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"sometimes we are so much taken by the outer beauty.....that we tend to forget what the person may look like from inside...."

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I might don't have straight blond hair
but baby, i do look wonderful......
in my light brunette wavy hair!

I might not be as intelligent as she is
but yes, i'm creative and intelligent .....
in my arena ; as she is in her's!

I might don't have the boldness like her
but definitely, i do have strength.....
to hold both of us!

I might not wear small black dress like her
but honey, i do look fabulous....
 in my black faded high waist jean and white sweatshirt...

I might night not  be as flawless as her
but my dear, i won't regret it.....
'cause from my flaws i become unique!

so,
you might think that i ain't perfect
but listen, in my imperfections.....
i look perfect!
and
if you don't want me....
i'll still love you!!
if you make those silly mistakes
i'll still forgive you.....unlike her
'cause it's one of my flaws.....
'cause priyam, you are ONE OF MY MISTAKE... 


© 2017 anonymous_at



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Never compare yourself dear. I liked how better you are from her. The contrast you've drawn to explain your imperfections makes you different and above her.

Posted 2 Hours Ago


love your imperfections! you are perfect the way you are.

Love,
lostinthewaves

Posted 2 Days Ago


anonymous_at

2 Days Ago

Thanks for encouraging..... :) keep visiting.... I hope you like my another new poem.... :)
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Sky
No one in this wordless is Flawless my friend. The way you described the inner beauty and strength of a girl is simply awesome. The last two lines are one my fav from the whole prose.

Posted 2 Days Ago


anonymous_at

2 Days Ago

Thanks a lot for stopping by and reviewing..... :)... Ya no one is perfect but sometimes few people .. read more
Sky

2 Days Ago

lol lying low!!?!! Nah never.....
anonymous_at

2 Days Ago

Great then..... :)
greaaaaaaaat write.

how often this happens. inner beauty can't be compared to outer beauty. I love the confidence!!!!

"I might don't have straight blond hair" I think you may have wanted to write "I might not have straight blond hair"
and;
"'cause from my flaws i become unique!" maybe "'cause from my flaws is (or becomes) unique!"

My dearest, I lovvvvve this write.

Posted 2 Days Ago


anonymous_at

2 Days Ago

Thanks for taking out your time to review my work and super thanks for positive review.... I'll try .. read more
and you look unique to me,inside and out

Posted 4 Days Ago


anonymous_at

4 Days Ago

Thanks for your kind and encouraging words....i hope priyam does notice that.....:)
 wordman

4 Days Ago

youu`re welcome
anonymous_at

4 Days Ago

Sure.... :)
As my first look at your page & your writing, I must first say that I really enjoy your uninhibited & energetic spirit that pours off the page. When you convey your message with so much energy & verve, it's easy to forget there are other points of view. What I love about your message here is that you are very mindful of the other's point of view, even tho you're expressing yours strongly & enthusiastically. It's a very good thing to not step on others when we do such comparisons (you didn't). This is a message of inspiration for the many who feel insecure about their looks and if they don't "fit in" . . . (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Days Ago


anonymous_at

4 Days Ago

Well.... I'm really flattered margie..... Thanks a lot......for taking out your time to go through m.. read more
barleygirl

4 Days Ago

There are many who try to write inspiring messages, but it ends up sounding like a cheerleader or a .. read more
anonymous_at

4 Days Ago

Ya sure Margie.... Well tbh I'm on cloud nine 'cause of your reviews..... Thanks a ton...
((H.. read more
Oh my god...i've read alot many of ur writing..But trust me..This 'THE BEST' writing of urs till date...From the grammar to the message..Everything is just perfect..Proud of u..And well..If I decide the rating for this article..Then it will be way behind..100..Such an amazing read..Really a treat for me😍

Posted 5 Days Ago


anonymous_at

5 Days Ago

thanks a lot mum......it really means a lot to me......i will try to write more great poems....
Thedreamer16

3 Days Ago

Don't write great poems...Just pen down ur true self..And trust me that is when u will just throw th.. read more
Good job. yes, you are perfect the way you are and the right people will see that :)


Posted 5 Days Ago


anonymous_at

5 Days Ago

Thank a lot for encouraging me..... :)
Avia

4 Days Ago

My pleasure :)
hope everyone likes it......and please ignore grammatical errors (if any)....positive and constructive reviews are welcome....

Posted 5 Days Ago



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Well.. I'm 16 yrs old...i'm sick nd tired of hiding my past... So i want it to be out there in front of everyone... Though you might find many grammatical errors.... So don't mock at them... Although .. more..

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