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# FROM FLAW TO FLAWLESS!

# FROM FLAW TO FLAWLESS!

A Poem by anonymous_at
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"sometimes we are so much taken by the outer beauty.....that we tend to forget what the person may look like from inside...."

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I might don't have straight blond hair
but baby, i do look wonderful......
in my light brunette wavy hair!

I might not be as intelligent as she is
but yes, i'm creative and intelligent .....
in my arena ; as she is in her's!

I might don't have the boldness like her
but definitely, i do have strength.....
to hold both of us!

I might not wear small black dress like her
but honey, i do look fabulous....
 in my black faded high waist jean and white sweatshirt...

I might night not  be as flawless as her
but my dear, i won't regret it.....
'cause from my flaws i become unique!

so,
you might think that i ain't perfect
but listen, in my imperfections.....
i look perfect!
and
if you don't want me....
i'll still love you!!
if you make those silly mistakes
i'll still forgive you.....unlike her
'cause it's one of my flaws.....
'cause priyam, you are ONE OF MY MISTAKE... 


© 2017 anonymous_at



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amazing poem, the love for oneself, being secure are two believable traits.

Posted 5 Months Ago


anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for reading work.... :)
And yes, these are those two things for which we quite f.. read more
Tis corny these days to compare a human being to a flower, a star, a thought that changes but shines in whatever weather.. sparkling in rain, trembling in the wind, etc. BUT is true. We are each what we are, can be, could be and believe me, always loved by someone, somewhere. Seeing and findings is the believing! There ends my first sermon, but, smilingly delivered.. Add S to your final word?

Posted 5 Months Ago


You only need the love of those who love you as they find you... as it should be :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

You are 100% right....but not all are blessed to have someone by their side....
Thanks a lot .. read more
This is poetry. Your words and statements. Made the situation come alive. You can make the words gain life and interesting. Perfect flow of description led to a amazing ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

Your kind and encouraging review are welcomed.... :).
Thank you so much for taking out your .. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

Was my pleasure. I enjoy your work and you are welcome.
anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

Glad to hear that..... :)
My favorite wardrobe sweatshirt and jeans. You are a whole human being and that is in itself the wonder of the soul.

regards,
al

Posted 5 Months Ago


anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

Hell yeah! Sweatshirt and jeans are my all time favorite.
..btw thanks a lot for your review.. read more
Love yourself the way you are, nice msg!

Posted 5 Months Ago


anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much... :)
You are unique and special just as you are. We need validation from within. Keep it up.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

If it is someone you trust. For others can lie to you. You are welcome.
anonymous_at

5 Months Ago

Ya, you are right....
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

:).................
Never compare yourself dear. I liked how better you are from her. The contrast you've drawn to explain your imperfections makes you different and above her.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

If he told you so, remember he is not worth you.
I had exams so I delayed for a while to rea.. read more
anonymous_at

9 Months Ago

No problem..... :) even i have exams..... I can understand.... How precious time becomes for us duri.. read more
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

Haha yeah. 😀
love your imperfections! you are perfect the way you are.

Love,
lostinthewaves

Posted 9 Months Ago


anonymous_at

9 Months Ago

Thanks for encouraging..... :) keep visiting.... I hope you like my another new poem.... :)
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SKY
No one in this wordless is Flawless my friend. The way you described the inner beauty and strength of a girl is simply awesome. The last two lines are one my fav from the whole prose.

Posted 9 Months Ago


anonymous_at

9 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for stopping by and reviewing..... :)... Ya no one is perfect but sometimes few people .. read more
SKY

9 Months Ago

lol lying low!!?!! Nah never.....
anonymous_at

9 Months Ago

Great then..... :)

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Well.. I'm 17 yrs old...i'm sick and tired of hiding my past... So i want it to be out there in front of everyone... Though you might find many grammatical errors.... So don't mock at them... Although.. more..

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