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A Quiet Afternoon

A Quiet Afternoon

A Story by Airafh

A quiet afternoon, sitting in my window gallery and losing myself in a beautiful book just taking breaks to watch the brown dried leaves fall of the branches of the tree whenever a squirrel hopped or a crow sat. Hearing the distinct tweet of the birds and watching a dog walk aimlessly in the buidling compound and the wind chime weaving it's melodious tune to this beautiful afternoon.


© 2017 Airafh



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The afternoon I wish for everyday!!
As most of my afternoons goes in handling hustle and bustle of college and studies but this kind of scene I enjoy in my vacations!!
But am really scared of dogs😀
But the image and the para makes me feel grabbing a book and sit in the window side even if I don't read the clouds will do the massage of my brain!
Thanks for sharing😊

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

3 Months Ago

Your feedbacks are amazing. :) Thanks a lot
Tahsin.Z🍁

3 Months Ago

As your paras are😊



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You are lucky to already be in the mindset to enjoy such a peaceful setting. At your age I was chronically busy & never sat to take in my surroundings. Now I am old & disabled, so after being forced to sit still, I’ve learned to appreciate all the beauty in my nearby wilderness. Your little descriptive vignette shows that, as a good writer, you have already learned to be a good observer – that’s where it all starts. Relaxing read (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

3 Months Ago

Humbled by your words Margie, thank you so much for much.:) Shortly posting another one on Nature, s.. read more
The afternoon I wish for everyday!!
As most of my afternoons goes in handling hustle and bustle of college and studies but this kind of scene I enjoy in my vacations!!
But am really scared of dogs😀
But the image and the para makes me feel grabbing a book and sit in the window side even if I don't read the clouds will do the massage of my brain!
Thanks for sharing😊

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

3 Months Ago

Your feedbacks are amazing. :) Thanks a lot
Tahsin.Z🍁

3 Months Ago

As your paras are😊
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Zoe
So pleasant to read. Vivid descriptions and a lovely picture.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much. Im glad you liked it
Zoe

3 Months Ago

No worries
the poem is full of immense beauty of nature...
after a long time i found a writing about nature...
hope to see more poems based on nature..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much Priyanshi for your comment, Im an avid nature lover, please also do read a short s.. read more
Airafh

3 Months Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Airafh/1959073/
Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

okaaay:))
sorry for my late reply....i was having exams.
lovely times to sit back and watch nature at its best rather than we watch in a blur.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much andrew. Childhood were the days when we had ample time to sit in the lap of natu.. read more
andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

i know it sucks!
Beautiful imagery. It reminds me of the beginning of spring or end of autumn. Things are beautiful, between the barrenness of winter and the lushness of summer.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airafh

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Clifford for your comments. Much appreciated.

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