A Quiet Afternoon

A quiet afternoon, sitting in my window gallery and losing myself in a beautiful book just taking breaks to watch the brown dried leaves fall of the branches of the tree whenever a squirrel hopped or a crow sat. Hearing the distinct tweet of the birds and watching a dog walk aimlessly in the buidling compound and the wind chime weaving it's melodious tune to this beautiful afternoon.

Reviews

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The afternoon I wish for everyday!!
As most of my afternoons goes in handling hustle and bustle of college and studies but this kind of scene I enjoy in my vacations!!
But am really scared of dogs😀
But the image and the para makes me feel grabbing a book and sit in the window side even if I don't read the clouds will do the massage of my brain!
Thanks for sharing😊

[Airafh]

Your feedbacks are amazing. :) Thanks a lot

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As your paras are😊

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem. we need the quiet afternoons. I enjoyed how you described the quiet place. Thank you Airafh for sharing your words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Jolan H]

Damn I have kids can I borrow your afternoon three days a week?

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

How lovely sounds
like my quiet mornings
and afternoons with
poetry and coffee ☕
and nature.


Thank you for sharing
such a peaceful piece.

[Airafh]

Thank you Benita for the lovely review..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome

[barleygirl]

You are lucky to already be in the mindset to enjoy such a peaceful setting. At your age I was chronically busy & never sat to take in my surroundings. Now I am old & disabled, so after being forced to sit still, I’ve learned to appreciate all the beauty in my nearby wilderness. Your little descriptive vignette shows that, as a good writer, you have already learned to be a good observer – that’s where it all starts. Relaxing read (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Airafh]

Humbled by your words Margie, thank you so much for much.:) Shortly posting another one on Nature, stay tuned. Thanks and Love.

[Zoya]

So pleasant to read. Vivid descriptions and a lovely picture.

[Airafh]

Thank you very much. Im glad you liked it

[Zoya]

No worries

[Priyanshi]

the poem is full of immense beauty of nature...
after a long time i found a writing about nature...
hope to see more poems based on nature..

[Airafh]

Thank you so much Priyanshi for your comment, Im an avid nature lover, please also do read a short story 'A Beautiful Dream' also based on nature

[Airafh]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Airafh/1959073/

[Priyanshi]

okaaay:))
sorry for my late reply....i was having exams.

[andrew mitchell]

lovely times to sit back and watch nature at its best rather than we watch in a blur.

[Airafh]

Thank you very much andrew. Childhood were the days when we had ample time to sit in the lap of nature, now its just my stupid office chair :P

[andrew mitchell]

i know it sucks!

[Jacob Clifford]

Beautiful imagery. It reminds me of the beginning of spring or end of autumn. Things are beautiful, between the barrenness of winter and the lushness of summer.

[Airafh]

Thank you very much Clifford for your comments. Much appreciated.