My Sweet Girl

My Sweet Girl

A Poem by Akshat♥
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I just wrote it after thinking about it :)

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She is what I have always wanted.

 

She looks beautiful in anything

But she is not one to be vain. 

Like an adorable baby girl,

She always wants to cuddle.

 

She is the lyrics to all of my songs,

Which I want to hear all lifelong.

She loves to eat chocolate,

Something I never deny.

 

She is the heart inside of my chest,

She is the answer to my prayers,

She is the mirror of my dreams,

She brings smiles to everyone she meets.

 

She has an unforgettable face,

And a naturally shy nature.

She will bring out the best

and worse hidden inside of you.

 

She has faith in God,

But believes equally in all religion.

She has so many friends,

And loves them without measure.

 

She is all that I have ever wanted. 



© 2013 Akshat♥


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I found a person who is really shy and true!

Lovely piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

I hope you never let that person go. Take Care.
I think every guy has same imagination of her girl.. but you expressed impressively!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very innocent and sweet piece, keep writing!
- Sarah

Posted 8 Years Ago


Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

Sure! Thank you:)
This is beautiful and sweet, pure inner beauty always reflects through ones words of heart. Love this :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Akshat♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Oh, this is beautiful - there is nothing more tender and amazing than children - especially your own - I'm guessing you wrote this about your daughter - I ccan't imagine life without my children - I love them so much that I would never be able to explain it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Akshat♥

9 Years Ago

Written about any sweet girl..thank you:)
The third stanza is my favorite 💖. Still magnificent!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Wonderful way to express your feelings...sweet and kind, lovely

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you:)
This is a beautiful poem keep them coming

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you:)
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
It describes a great love for someone special. This was a great poem. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you:)
so simple, beautiful and sweet :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on July 18, 2013
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Akshat♥
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