Time

you must value your time

One thing moving

tic tic 

tic tic

Taking your age away

Making you feel old

Giving you experience in each day

You get used to it

You have to wait for it

but it doesn't wait for you

It never stops for anyone

giving you enough

but still something less

You always need it more

more for each day

Some period ends with happiness

Some ends with gloominess

One thing is still moving...

Reviews

[.shalynn.009.]

Ooh, I got chills with that ending line. A wonderful characterization of time. I like how you started out with three line stanzas, went to two-line stanzas, adn ended with one line, in a kind of progression, the way time progressed, leaving the speaker of the poem behind. This underscored the tone, that feeling of wanting more time, but having it slip away, just like the number of lines in the stanzas dwindled away. Possibly my favorite that you have written. Well done.

[GreenSkeleton16]

cool :) nice poem about time. gotta live life to the fullest.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Saumya]

really very true, "TIME" .....
that tic-tic another essential element in life after heartbeat:)

the best teacher, healer,and everything that only rules all of us every time.....!!!

becomes a good friend, when supports us
becomes a good teacher, when really gives us to learn something.....
becomes the best healer to cure us from the sufferings....

and most interestingly, is never the same...!!

and everything with life's journey, but still the best, which really makes life a remarkable one if we honestly learn and respect it...!!!!

very well described...!!
an enjoyable read and write:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Saumya]

youre wlcm:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

One thing's for sure.. time waits for no man. You have to enjoy what time you have here and now. Good poem.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Time moves on..nice

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

Time plays an important part in our lives:)

[Hitman]

Time waits for none..nicely written:)

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

A very true write, but hard to realise. love it :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

This poem is so real. Every line is so very well written, and the way you've written would get anyone to think about all the time they've wasted. GREAT JOB!!!

[-Scribe in Style-]

Time has just gone...
You reminded me the clock is ticking and I have to get going.
Well written

[Enigma]

That was good. :)