Miracle

All the things we see, they are all miracle...

Naturally Impossible Events

are what we call Miracles.

Meditation can bring Miracles.

People usually consider flying in air or

going in water without mask a miracle.

But I think the real miracle is not 

to fly in the air or going into water 

without a mask,

but to walk on earth.

White clouds,A Blue sky,Green leaves,

the Black curious eyes of a child,

Yellow Grains,Spring Season.

All is a Miracle.

There is Nothing like spending quality time with great Friends.

A single Mom who's working and still

finds time to take her kids out,

making good  food,

that's a Miracle.

A single Dad who's working whole day and earn money

to make their child live in a healthy environment,

that's a Miracle.

A Youngster who says no to Fast food

and yes to healthy food,

that's a Miracle.

Realizing good things in us

and making them better

that's a Miracle.

You should realize that you have the power.

If u want a miracle,Be the miracle.

You all have the divine spark.

You all have the gift for bringing

bliss and glee to the world.

See after feeling this.

You feel strong from inside..

that's a Spark.

Bring this Spark alive in you

and see the real world.

This world containing all things in it,

is all a Miracle.

Author's Note

I write this while seeing a miracle today.

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

this is a poem full of wisdom and truth...
People usually consider flying in air or
going in water without mask a miracle.
But I think the real miracle is not
to fly in air or going in water
without mask,
but to walk on earth.

that line made me realize a lot of things... thanks for sharing this poem to us...

[dw817]

Wow ! How colorful, beautiful rainbow you created here ! Love what you wrote here, "If you want a miracle, be the miracle."

Yet some people may disagree and say, "We can't all be princesses, someone has to clap when I walk by." Well, there will always be people like that in the world. :)

But the greatest miracle of all, is you. As I think Dr. McCoy told Kirk in Star Trek onetime, if you take the planet Kirk lives on and go out from there, leave the planetary orbit, the solar system, leave the galaxy, leave the universe, and even beyond.

There is still and only one Kirk. That is your miracle, Akshat. You are your own miracle, and what you decide to do with your life is sincerely and utterly up to you. Don't disappoint the cosmos. :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear ..means a lot to me:)

[dw817]

UBetcha - take care ...

[Patrick O'Neil]

To speak kind words,a miracle indeed. Nice told.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Sheila Kline]

Yes, miracles are with us each day when we view them as you speak of. Your writing is most inspirational and supportive of the better ideals and qualities of mankind! Thank you for another way to view that which is seemingly ordinary, but really extraordinary!
I am impressed by the way you carry the idea throughout your write!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear..means a lot to me..I hope you will read and love my other poems :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the repetition of both miracle and spark in this piece. I think they lend well to the flow. There is a lot of emotion in this piece and I know you are an emotional writer. I have to agree with Astro, I would also like to see some pizazz in this poem.. some showing instead of telling. For instance instead of saying fastfood say a burger and fries (or equivalent) and instead of healthy food, say apples and rice.. do you see what I mean? show instead of tell.. I think you could do that through out the poem, tighten it and really make it shine. There is nothing wrong with it as written, with the exception of some grammatical errors, but if you are really serious about writing poetry, then you need to show your emotions more and tell them less.. I want to see your poetry come alive.

[Akshat♥]

Thanks for your concern dear :)
I have corrected grammatical errors as Astro said..
From my next piece i will try to improve ...i will remember all your points in my mind :)

[Saumya]

this is realllllllllllly a lovely poem...!!
never expected to lively see and feel such beauty in a poem..!!
something, which is really good,and unique, here is, the mentioning of mother, father, nature, and our own self, the ones which really are a miracle to us..!!
this is something, that makes makes it exceptionally good..!!
very well done
keep writing and rocking,
with best wishes,
saumya

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed..!! :)

[Shivam Murari]

The whole poem is a mix of emotions, thanksgiving, joys, reminisce, laughter. A like how you have put a correct definition of miracle throughout the poem, while most of us fail to see or notice. A moving piece, Akshat! :-)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for understanding my poem,Shivam :)

[Shivam Murari]

The pleasure is all mine! :-)
BTW, why don't you send read requests for allowing a wider range of people to read a larger number of poems of yours :-)

[Akshat♥]

most people here don't accept requests...and the remaining bother less...

[Shivam Murari]

Doesn't mean you can't give it a try ;-)

[Akshat♥]

i tried many times...experience says :)

[Shivam Murari]

Ok Ok. then at least send me :P

[Akshat♥]

i will message you...don't worry :)

[Shivam Murari]

haha! :P

[asdarkeyesclose]

'A single Mom who's working and still
finds time to take her kids out,
making good food,
that's a Miracle.'

i found this such a positive message and one i needed to hear, so down to earth and understanding that it truly is the simple things that are imortant. i needed to read this today as i'm feeling slightly down and out of sorts and it lifted me. made me feel thankful for what i've got. fantastic.

[Akshat♥]

I am glad that you liked it..Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)

[Astro]

Grammatical errors aside, the sentiment of your piece shines through. The Miracle of Life, the inspiration for us all, sadly, overlooked but easily gained. I'm not sure if English is your second language or not, but you have a firm grasp of it, but like you say in your poem, where there is a spark, there is a potential to make it brighter. In this case, I believe you could 'shine' your piece up a bit, and offer up something more miraculous than you thought you could.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you astro...I would love it more if you have tried to give the grammatical errors..so that i can improve this poem :)

[Astro]

For example, in your opening, you define miracles as "Naturally Impossible Events" then go on to write, "is what we say as a Miracle." Here you could swap 'as' for 'is' because you are trying to give a precise definition. You could go even further and reword the whole statement to something like: We define 'Miracles' as 'naturally impossible events'. Another note, on this section, the definition you give is pluralized so, you may want to do so to the word miracle. So then you would write, "Naturally Impossible Events are what we call 'Miracles'. There isn't one true way, this is poetry, but there is a grammatical line that (sometimes) needs to be toed to guide the flow of a piece. I will leave you with a couple more areas, and then my dear you are on your own, and good luck, you can do it.
1. flying in air - without mask
2. But I think the real miracle is not
to fly in air or going in water
without mask,
but to walk on earth.

You have forgotten the "articles" before your nouns *definite = 'the'* *indefinite = 'a or an'*. So then, your words should read more like, "...to fly in "the" air...going into water without "a" mask. Do you see the difference? Work on adding the proper 'articles' in your sentences and your meaning will shine brighter. Good night.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much dear..i will surely correct it :)
Try to see my other pieces :)

[Astro]

You are welcome, I will sample some more of your writing in the future.

[Akshat♥]

you are a good person from heart ..my friend..take care :)

[Astro]

Thank you and you as well.

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

Here are my first impressions:

1. Wow! Awesome color effects!
2. The theme of MIRACLES is stunning!
3. The final message is inspiring!

INTERPRETATION

1. Meditation: Meditation brings a wonderful gift to those who are closed and open.
2. Miracles: Miracles happen everyday.
3. Mother Earth: The symbolic reference is our homeland which is love.

CONCLUSION

1. Beautiful work!
2. "...we have the power" Reminds me of "Bruce Almighty"
3. I see Innocence and Idealism which are my two favorite things!

love,
ria

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for this lovely review dear..means a lot to me :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D

[Pól]

thanks A. I was a single parent + I think I did that.

Nice sentiment poetically expressed

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)