Voices

Sometimes voices disturb us or give us a path where we get involved deeply...

Voices echos in my mind
making my thoughts wild.

Voices sharpen the situation
diminishing the silence around.

Situation getting worse and

I am going crazier every second.

These voices are harder to stop
trying is also a waste of time.

These voices wants to say something
about life
about struggle
about childhood
about peer pressure
about a bright future
about responsibilities
about everything ...

These situations made me think harder

Are these things crazier
or I am believing in them.

Hard to try
Hard to find
these voices are making me blind.

Some voices making me strong
giving me experience in this
field of ignorance.

Balancing the situation between
bad and good voices,
I throw myself in this field of choices.

Wish me good luck
Wish me a bright future
these voices cannot break me apart
Since in every road there are many paths.

I will make my own voice for others
to compete and destroy these bad voices.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Great poem. Those pesky voices. I like the way you structured the stanzas and used color. Our inner voice to me, Is something that our gut feels warning us or saying yes this feels right. Sometimes those voices are good you just have to be in tune and follow the positive. Love the poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the inner thoughts, full of wisdom :)

[Raven Starhawk]

I like how you use colors to shade certain words. It jumps out at me and as I read the voice in my head stresses the colored words as though they are of importance. Very charming. I like it.

[Tom Benson]

Good strong idea here and for most of it the change of font colour works in your favour. I particularly like the final two lines. A resolute statement that you have your own voice and it will compete.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

I really like the message in this poem. Rather than listening to other voices, you said you'll listen to your own. that is awesome. Love it.