I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[beautiful life]

I really like how you use colors to write your poems :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[smilempsn]

That reminded me of a song.... :)
Nice flow ...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

ahh...blew off :P

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Zoya Sahai]

There's a disarming honesty and sincerity in it. It's simple yet very beautiful. Well done.. :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Anuvart]

love is so pure :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Hitman]

nice:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[sudeshna]

hmmmmmmm ..... no words... just felt each and every line... nicely written

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Nupur]

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.
these lines are like base of any true relationship, gud one

[Akshat♥]

I know..thank you:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"Because I have no heart and you have two." Beautifully written.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

It's difficult to want to give people all your time, or if you have to wait for them a long time. I hope the wait was or is worth the effort.

[Akshat♥]

till now am just waiting :(

[Amber "Victoriomantic" Hart]

I'm sorry to hear that. I hope your time isn't wasted.

[Akshat♥]

I hope same,lol