I Said You Said

This is just a funny conversation between two people:):)

I wanted a friend so I asked you

I already have many friends
so why taking a chance on me

I changed my mind so do you

bye..

wait I am taking a chance on you

I am not a chance by your choice

so let me change this to
your favor ..so let me introduce you as
my best friend..

so fast..

lets see can you do right justice with

my decision..

Hey are you flirting
with me..

No never..you are not
my type..

Tell me about your type..??

He must be understandable ,
loving,handsome,have a long height,a party freak,
short nice hair,respect woman,elders..

(actually laughed).. you seems so funny..

I am not..

okay..

what about you??
at-least she should be funny,
then she laughed..

then all this continues forever..

Author's Note

I think its a funny kind of thing i have written..I think
you all will like it..please review it and rate it..
I will really appreciate it:)
IN BLUE COLOR: I SAID
IN PINK COLOR: SHE SAID

Reviews

[Tom Benson]

I could see what you were aiming at but I'm a bit of a purist when it comes to dialogue ... even in poetry. If you don't mind I have a couple of things that I feel would improve this type of write.
Use one colour for one speaker and a different colour for the other.
Use quotation marks for words spoken.
To emphasise a particular word in a sentence, use italics instead of other colours.

Apart from that, I think it works.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

I guess its like when the girl here is just trying to be a Smart A*s and wanted the guy to stick around
and show her attitude like don't take a chance and all :D
but, when she saw that the guy is not interested she changes her ways to let him stay!

hahahaha :D
Weird! but i enjoyed it!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you. I cant say more. Take care

[Rachika Evelyn Fauz]

it’s light read, funny but gets to the point. again simple as your other writes.
Keep writing.
Blessings your way.

[Ankita]

This one's funny and sweet. A very casual one yet interesting. :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is an adorable dialogue about friendship. This stanza needs to be changed as it is in third person and if it is her talking, it should be in first person..

She said she already has many friends
so why taking a chance on me

something like

I already have many friends
so why should I take a chance on you

nice poem, well done

[Akshat♥]

Lol yeah...I was so happy one day that I laughed so hard...
so i thought about writing something like this ;)
Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Funny conversation lol :D

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Jeff]

Very entertaining!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you jeff :)

[Jeff]

You're welcome!

[Prritiy]

this is seemingly funny but real serious one, liked it

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)

[Prritiy]

welcome

[Anusha Prabhu]

It's great..funny really...And lovable too...loved it...entertaining piece..!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

wow,too funny ...it is so different write :)

[Hitman]

Nice conversation...
Too funny :D