Red Eyes

Red Eyes

A Poem by Akshay

Slipping right through my senses
You hold me down for my red rabbit eyes
I'm stuck inside your fences
When you walk by, the silence in my head dies

Timid, fast and tumor free
You hold me down so I can't see
What would you like, meat or fur
Or do you just want a pet for abuses to hurl

Slippery thoughts keep skipping
You hold me down for my red rabbit eyes
Question remains why do you keep me living
"I'll just make the most of him, till he survives"

Old, slow and tumors in me
You hold me down, I still can't see
What do you like, me or him
Have you forgotten how my red eyes gleam

© 2014 Akshay



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Akshay
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Wow. I really liked this one. I like how the meter is not on, and shows the emotion well. The rhyming ends match up well, although usually rhyming is not my style. I love the red eyes, unusual and shows the specialness of the character. Great work! Please return the favor and review one of mine? :)

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Akshay

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time.



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Wow. I really liked this one. I like how the meter is not on, and shows the emotion well. The rhyming ends match up well, although usually rhyming is not my style. I love the red eyes, unusual and shows the specialness of the character. Great work! Please return the favor and review one of mine? :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshay

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time.

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Akshay
Akshay

Delhi, India



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20 - No speciality. I'm hard on myself. Not a good listener. I write to feel better, not because I'm great. I like to live in my own la la land. I hate drunks. I like to drink. more..

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