Concern

Concern

A Poem by Ariya

Pain
Might be tearing
You apart
But remember

I'm fine
Is all they
want to hear;

© 2017 Ariya



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amazing line..
keep on writing..


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ariya

3 Weeks Ago

Thankyou!!
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His true. How many times have you enquired, not really caring, as to how someone is, only to sigh inwardly ad they list their ailments, problems.
I like this, short and to the point

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ariya

3 Weeks Ago

Thankyou for giving your time :)
This touched me because i have told this to myself many times. Sometimes there's so much behind "I'm fine" but we don't think anyone cares enough to notice.

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Ariya

3 Weeks Ago

Yes, no one cares.
Thankyou for stopping by.
Avia

3 Weeks Ago

I like to believe there's a few people who actually care, sometimes we're too blind by hurt to see i.. read more
Yes, that's all they want to hear.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ariya

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for giving your time :)

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Added on September 23, 2017
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Ariya
Ariya

Hindu, India



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