Concern

Pain
Might be tearing
You apart
But remember

I'm fine
Is all they
want to hear;

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The only concern in the life of all lovers: Breakup hurts & yes it really does hurts a lot.

[Anshuman Aryav]

amazing line..
keep on writing..

[Ariya]

Thankyou!!

[Gee]

His true. How many times have you enquired, not really caring, as to how someone is, only to sigh inwardly ad they list their ailments, problems.
I like this, short and to the point

[Ariya]

Thankyou for giving your time :)

[Avia]

This touched me because i have told this to myself many times. Sometimes there's so much behind "I'm fine" but we don't think anyone cares enough to notice.

[Ariya]

Yes, no one cares.
Thankyou for stopping by.

[Avia]

I like to believe there's a few people who actually care, sometimes we're too blind by hurt to see it. You're welcome, it was a pleasure

[Paul Bell]

Yes, that's all they want to hear.

[Ariya]

Thanks for giving your time :)