Like The Rose

Dedicated to my girlfriend Kersten, and how much she means to me.

Just like the rose, she is my flower,
the only rose without a thorn.
She is my moon, she is my sun,
the avatar of a Goddess.
She is my light when it is dark,
she is my hope when I’m in need.
Just like the rose, she is my flower,
but she will never wilt from my mind.

Reviews

[Tenten]

sweet, delicate, gentle love. this is beautiful.

[sadxdeathxsuicide]

makes me cry that its so sweet , i love it

[~crazy Beautiful~]

beautiful piece, i love the flower as a metaphore for love
nice work
thank you for entering my contest